Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I learn something new, I have to review it several times to remember it well.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“often forgotten”应为“often forget”，且重复使用“I I”。表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I often forget important things, so I find using a memorandum very useful. I usually write down important notes to help me remember.

提案: 回答开头重复了考官的问题，且存在语法错误，如“a positive emotions”应为“positive emotions”，“my healthy”应为“my physical health”。建议直接回答问题并注意单复数和词汇搭配。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to maintain positive emotions because they are beneficial for both my physical and mental health.

提案: 回答表达基本清晰，但“write them down on the sticks”不够准确，可能指的是“sticky notes”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并适当丰富细节。

例: I use the notes app on my phone to remember important things. Sometimes, I also write them down on sticky notes and put them where I can see easily.

× No, no, I'm not good at memory things.

✓ No, no, I'm not good at memorising things.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作。memory是名词，不能直接修饰things。

× I I often forgotten something important, so I I think the memorandum is very useful.

✓ I often forget something important, so I think the memorandum is very useful.

'forgotten'是过去分词，缺少助动词，句中应使用一般现在时动词'forget'，因为描述的是经常发生的事情。

× I often use it to write down my important things.

✓ I often use it to write down my important notes.

'important things'表达不准确，应该用更具体的名词如'notes'来表达重要事项。

× Your daily life. I think I need to remember to maintain a positive emotions every day because they are beneficial for both my healthy and mental health.

✓ In daily life, I think I need to maintain positive emotions every day because they are beneficial for both my physical and mental health.

'Your daily life'不符合语境，应改为'in daily life'；'a positive emotions'中情感是复数，不能用不定冠词'a'；'healthy'应为名词'health'，且应为'physical health'。

× I use my memorandum on my phone to remember important things. Sometimes I write them down on the sticks.

✓ I use the memorandum on my phone to remember important things. Sometimes I write them down on sticky notes.

'on my phone'正确，但'memorandum'前应加定冠词'the'；'sticks'用词不当，应为'sticky notes'表示便签纸。