Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如"gonna"不够正式，"greater inconvenient"应为"very inconvenient"。建议使用更正式和准确的表达，同时避免重复和冗长。

例: Honestly, I am not very good at memorising rare things because I often forget important items when I go out. For example, I sometimes leave my phone or keys at home, which is very inconvenient.

提案: 回答结构较好，但句子连接不够自然，缺少连接词。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, just today I forgot to take my phone when I left the hotel, which made traveling quite inconvenient and troublesome.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如句子连接不当，缺少标点。建议分句清晰，使用连接词，并避免重复表达。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my plans and important tasks. Therefore, I use my phone to write them down, which helps me stay organized and finish my work on time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如"you can help me"应为"it helps me"，"cleanly schedules"表达不准确。建议使用正确的代词和更合适的词汇。

例: I usually remember important things by writing them down on my phone because it helps me improve my efficiency and keep my schedule organized.

× I usually leave my phone or key at home, which can be greater inconvenient.

✓ I usually leave my phone or key at home, which can be very inconvenient.

这里使用了错误的形容词比较级“greater”，应使用副词“very”来修饰形容词“inconvenient”，表示“非常不方便”。

× I think when traveling without a phone is inconvenient and troublesome.

✓ I think traveling without a phone is inconvenient and troublesome.

句子中多余的“when”导致结构混乱，应去掉“when”使句子结构完整通顺。

× I usually use my phone every day to write down my daily plans and important tasks because it helps me remember important tasks and improve my efficiency That helps me finish my work on time.

✓ I usually use my phone every day to write down my daily plans and important tasks because it helps me remember important tasks and improve my efficiency. That helps me finish my work on time.

原句中两个句子之间缺少句号，导致句子连贯性差，应在“efficiency”后加句号分开两个句子。

× I usually remember important things by writing down in my phone because you can help me improve my efficiency and bring me cleanly schedules.

✓ I usually remember important things by writing them down in my phone because it can help me improve my efficiency and bring me clear schedules.

原句中“writing down in my phone”缺少宾语，应补充“them”；“you”指代不明，应改为“it”指代“phone”；“cleanly schedules”形容词用错，应改为“clear schedules”。