Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e direct question er uttor den, ar clear bhabe bolun apni memorising e kemon. Apnar uttor e confusion ache, tai eta clear korte hobe. Apni chesta korun simple ar direct sentence use korte, jemon 'No, I am not very good at memorising things.'

例: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget details quickly.

提案: Apni answer e repetition ar unnecessary words komate paren. Directly bolun apni important kichu bhule jaen, ar kichu example dite paren. Linking word use korte paren jemon 'sometimes' or 'often' properly.

例: Yes, I often forget important things, such as appointments or deadlines, which sometimes causes problems.

提案: Apni question er uttor e ekta complete sentence dite hobe. 'Yeah' diye kono information deya hoy na. Apni bolte paren ki ki jinis apnar daily life e mone rakhte hoy.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my work schedule, meetings, and important tasks to complete.

提案: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu aro specific details add korte paren. Linking word use kore uttor ke aro logical korte paren. Jemon, 'Sometimes I take notes, and I also set reminders on my phone to help me remember important things.'

例: Sometimes I take notes, and I also set reminders on my phone to help me remember important things like meetings or deadlines.

× Yeah, I actually I sometimes, very often, I forget so many things, important and unimportant things also.

✓ Yeah, actually, I sometimes, very often, forget many things, both important and unimportant.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words causing confusion and poor sentence structure. Removing the repeated 'I' and rearranging the sentence improves clarity and flow. Also, 'so many things' is better replaced with 'many things' for formal speech, and 'important and unimportant things also' is better expressed as 'both important and unimportant' for conciseness.