Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“most of my memory are long term memory”应为“most of my memories are long-term memories”。建议注意主谓一致和复数形式的使用，同时避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. My mother even says it might be a talent of mine. I tend to have a strong long-term memory, especially for events that have a strong emotional impact on me.

提案: 回答较为直接，但缺少连接词使得句子之间衔接不够流畅。建议使用连接词如“for example”后面加以解释，并丰富细节，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, last year I forgot the date of a concert I was supposed to attend with my friend, which made me feel very embarrassed and guilty.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“each deadline will is different”应改为“each deadline is different”，且表达重复。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember the deadlines for all my college assignments because each course has different due dates. Therefore, I make sure to keep track of them so I can submit my work on time.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“when I was I'm trying to forget”表达不清晰。建议简化句子，避免语法错误，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I usually remember important things by writing them down in the memo app on my phone. This method helps me recall information better, and if I ever feel like I might forget, I can simply check my notes to remind myself.

× And most of my memory are long term memory so if one once offended me I will memorize this forever.

✓ And most of my memories are long term memories, so if someone once offended me, I will memorize it forever.

memory是不可数名词时表示记忆力，复数memories表示具体的记忆内容。此处应使用复数memories表示多条记忆。long term memory应为long term memories，表示多条长期记忆。句中one指代不明确，改为someone更合适。

× It happened last year and I just forgot the date of the concert, so it made me very embarrassed and guilty.

✓ It happened last year and I forgot the date of the concert, so it made me very embarrassed and guilty.

句中just用法不当，表示刚刚发生的动作，但此处描述过去发生的事情，去掉just更合适。forgot为过去式，符合时态要求。

× I need to remember every deadline of my task in my college because there are various tasks for different courses and each deadline will is different.

✓ I need to remember every deadline of my tasks in my college because there are various tasks for different courses and each deadline is different.

task应为复数tasks，表示多个任务。句中will is结构错误，应去掉will，使用is表示每个截止日期不同。

× So I need to remember every deadline so that I can hand in to it just on time.

✓ So I need to remember every deadline so that I can hand it in just on time.

hand in是及物动词短语，后面直接跟宾语it，不需要介词to。句子结构错误，需调整。

× I usually remember important things by noting them down on my memo in my cell phone because I think it helps me to remember things better and when I was I'm trying to forget, I can check it on my phone so that I wouldn't forget.

✓ I usually remember important things by noting them down on my memo in my cell phone because I think it helps me to remember things better, and when I am trying to forget, I can check it on my phone so that I won't forget.

句中when I was I'm trying to forget结构混乱，应改为when I am trying to forget。so that后面表示将来时，使用wouldn't不合适，应改为won't。连词and前后句子时态应一致。