Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，且表达略显重复和不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免冗余。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially vocabulary. I find it challenging because there are so many words to remember at once, which can be quite overwhelming.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，逻辑不清晰。建议理清句子结构，使用连词使表达更连贯，并注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

例: Yes, I have. Once, when I was traveling abroad, I forgot my passport at home. It made me very nervous because I couldn't board the plane without it. Fortunately, I found the airline staff who helped me, but it was a very stressful experience.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时丰富细节使内容更具体。

例: As a university student, I need to remember the schedule for my different classes. Since the timetable changes frequently, it's important to keep track of the time carefully so that I don't miss any lectures.

提案: 回答内容完整且表达较好，但有小的语法错误，如“help”应为“helps”，建议注意主谓一致，并尝试使用更多高级词汇。

例: Well, I usually use the Calendar app on my phone to remember important things because it helps me keep track of my schedule and reminds me on time. For example, I can set alarms for meetings and deadlines so I never forget them. This method is very convenient and effective.

× No, I'm not very good at memory things, especially vocabulary.

✓ No, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially vocabulary.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作。'memory'是名词，不能直接修饰'things'。

× But as a result I'm likely because I managed to find the airplane staff to help me and it's such a stressful.

✓ But as a result, I was lucky because I managed to find the airplane staff to help me and it was very stressful.

句中'l likely'用法错误，应为'was lucky'表示过去的状态。'it's such a stressful'缺少名词，应该是'it was very stressful'。时态应保持一致，描述过去事件用过去时。

× Well, I usually use the Calendar app on my phone to remember important things because it help me keep track of my schedule and remind me on time.

✓ Well, I usually use the Calendar app on my phone to remember important things because it helps me keep track of my schedule and reminds me on time.

动词help和remind需要与主语it保持第三人称单数形式，故应为'helps'和'reminds'。

× For example, I can set alarms for meeting and deadlines so I never forget them.

✓ For example, I can set alarms for meetings and deadlines so I never forget them.

'meeting'应为复数形式'meetings'，因为通常有多个会议。

× For example, I can set alarms for meeting and deadlines so I never forget them.

✓ For example, I can set alarms for meetings and deadlines so I never forget them.

同上，'meeting'应为复数形式'meetings'，以匹配'deadlines'的复数形式。