Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，且表达重复。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并避免自我贬低。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget what my mom asks me to remember in daily life.

提案: 回答中时态错误明显，如“just forgotten”应为“just forgotten”。建议使用正确的时态，并且回答更具体，说明忘记作业的具体情况。

例: Yes, I have forgotten some important things like my homework sometimes because I was busy with other tasks.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，句子未完成且缺乏逻辑连接。建议明确列出需要记住的事项，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to submit my homework on time and help with housework because I want to support my mother, who takes care of our family.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显重复和不够简洁。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并合理使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I usually write notes to remember important things. For example, I check my notebook or phone reminders while on the bus, which helps me not to forget tasks.

× I don't think I'm good at memory things because I'm not very intelligent and although in our daily life, in my daily life, when my mom asked me to remember some things, I often forget it.

✓ I don't think I'm good at memorising things because I'm not very intelligent and although in my daily life, when my mom asks me to remember some things, I often forget them.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作；'forget it'中的'it'指代不明确，应该用复数'them'指代前面的'things'。此外，时态和主谓一致也需要调整。

× I have. Well, I haven't forgotten something important because I am a student. I just forgotten something like homework.

✓ I have. Well, I haven't forgotten anything important because I am a student. I have just forgotten things like homework.

'just forgotten'缺少助动词'have'，正确形式是'have just forgotten'；'something'在否定句中应使用'anything'；'things like homework'更符合表达习惯。

× I need to remember to submit my homework and do some housework in my daily life because I'm a student and I think my mother is very and I am grateful to my mother.

✓ I need to remember to submit my homework and do some housework in my daily life because I'm a student. I think my mother is very kind, and I am grateful to her.

原句中'my mother is very'后缺少形容词，导致句子不完整；应补充形容词'kind'；另外，句子结构需要分开，'grateful to my mother'中'grateful to her'更自然。

× Well, I often use some notes to remember important things because when I am reading the notebooks, the things I have written on the bus often remind me.

✓ Well, I often use some notes to remember important things because when I am reading the notes, the things I have written on the bus often remind me.

'reading the notebooks'不符合语境，应为'reading the notes'，因为前文提到的是'notes'而非'notebooks'。

× Sometimes I write some notes on the phone.

✓ Sometimes I write some notes on my phone.

'on the phone'通常指打电话，表达写笔记应为'on my phone'，表示在手机上写笔记。