Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，且回答有重复。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更自然的句式。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, especially specific dates and deadlines. Therefore, I rely on technology to help me keep track of important tasks.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“haven't forgot”应为“haven't forgotten”，且有过多的语气词“uh”，影响流畅度。建议减少语气词，注意时态和介词的正确使用。

例: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I use reminders and calendars to alert me. I pay close attention to these tools to avoid missing anything.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“the the projects deadlines”和“message promote the so that give a good service”。建议理清句子结构，使用完整且连贯的句子表达观点。

例: I need to remember my assignments and project deadlines. Also, I have to respond to emails and messages promptly to provide good service to my clients.

提案: 回答表达基本清晰，但有拼写错误，如“stake notes”应为“sticky notes”，且句子结构可以更自然。建议注意拼写并使用更流畅的句式。

例: I prefer to use my smartphone to set alarms and reminders on my To-Do List. Sometimes, I also write important things on sticky notes and place them in visible areas.

× Uh, no, I haven't forgot anything important since I use my reminders or the calendars to, uh, give me the alert, uh, for important things.

✓ Uh, no, I haven't forgotten anything important since I use my reminders or the calendars to, uh, give me the alert, uh, for important things.

这里使用的是现在完成时，助动词是'have'，后面应该接过去分词形式的动词。'forgot'是一般过去式，正确的过去分词形式是'forgotten'。

× And uh, uh, I'm very pay attention to these things in case of I forgot it.

✓ And uh, uh, I pay very close attention to these things in case I forget them.

短语应为'pay attention to'，'very'修饰'adjective'或'adverb'，应放在'pay'和'attention'之间。'in case of'后面不直接接主语和动词，正确用法是'in case'后直接接从句。'forgot'应为现在时'forget'，因为是表示将来可能发生的情况。

× I always need to remember my assignments and the the projects deadlines because yeah, I also have to respond to the emails and the message promote the so that give a good service to my clients.

✓ I always need to remember my assignments and the project deadlines because, yeah, I also have to respond to the emails and the messages to promote so that I give good service to my clients.

'projects deadlines'应为'project deadlines'，'message'应为复数'messages'，因为前面提到的是复数的'emails'，保持一致。

× I also have to respond to the emails and the message promote the so that give a good service to my clients.

✓ I also have to respond to the emails and the messages to promote so that I give good service to my clients.

'promote the so that'结构不正确，应为'promote so that'，'so that'引导目的状语从句，后面应有主语和谓语。

× I prefer to use my smart phones to set alarms on the reminders or To Do List to remember the important things.

✓ I prefer to use my smartphone to set alarms, reminders, or To-Do lists to remember important things.

'smart phones'应为单数'smartphone'，因为通常指个人手机。'alarms on the reminders'表达不清，应分开'alarm'和'reminders'。'To Do List'应为复数形式'To-Do lists'，且中间加连字符。

× And sometimes I also use the stake notes write down the important things and keep them in visible areas.

✓ And sometimes I also use sticky notes to write down important things and keep them in visible areas.

'stake notes'应为'sticky notes'，且动词'write'前应加不定式'to'。