Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致和时态使用，同时避免重复表达。

例: I am not very good at memorising things, but I use methods like taking notes and setting reminders on my phone to help me remember important information.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且内容重复。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并避免无意义的重复。

例: Yes, I once forgot an important exam because I was very busy. However, I now take notes and set reminders on my phone to avoid forgetting important events.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用连词连接句子，使回答更连贯。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to complete assessments with my team and to exercise regularly. To help with this, I take notes and set reminders.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误明显，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达方法，并避免重复。

例: I usually remember important things by taking notes on my tablet and setting reminders on my phone. These methods help me stay organized and not forget important tasks.

× Sadly I struggle with memory thing but I have a good hobbies like take notes or setting reminders on my phone so even though I have difficult.

✓ Sadly I struggle with memory things but I have good hobbies like taking notes or setting reminders on my phone so even though I have difficulties.

memory thing 应为复数 memory things，因为指的是记忆的多个方面；good hobbies 中 hobbies 是复数，前面不需要加冠词 a；take notes 和 setting reminders 应统一为动名词形式 taking notes 和 setting reminders；have difficult 应为 have difficulties，difficult 是形容词，需用名词形式 difficulties。

× Sadly I struggle with memory thing but I have a good hobbies like take notes or setting reminders on my phone so even though I have difficult.

✓ Sadly I struggle with memory things but I have good hobbies like taking notes or setting reminders on my phone so even though I have difficulties.

在 like 后面应使用动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事，因此 take notes 应改为 taking notes。

× Yeah sure as I'm college student I forgot important exam but I have a good hobbies like taking notes on my belly and set reminder on my phone.

✓ Yeah sure, as I'm a college student I forgot an important exam but I have good hobbies like taking notes on my belly and setting reminders on my phone.

college student 前应加不定冠词 a；important exam 应加不定冠词 an important exam；good hobbies 是复数，前面不加 a；set reminder 应改为 setting reminders，保持动名词形式和复数形式。

× Yeah sure as I'm college student I forgot important exam but I have a good hobbies like taking notes on my belly and set reminder on my phone.

✓ Yeah sure, as I'm a college student I forgot an important exam but I have good hobbies like taking notes on my belly and setting reminders on my phone.

taking notes 通常用 on 表示在某物上记笔记，这里用法正确，但“on my belly”不合适，可能是口误，应改为更合理的表达，如“in my notebook”。

× Yeah sure as I'm college student I forgot important exam but I have a good hobbies like taking notes on my belly and set reminder on my phone.

✓ Yeah sure, as I'm a college student I forgot an important exam but I have good hobbies like taking notes on my belly and setting reminders on my phone.

set reminder 应改为动名词形式 setting reminders，保持与前面 taking notes 结构一致。

× In my daily life, I should remember something like doing assessments with teamwork and workout by myself and it's importantly for me, so I take notes or.

✓ In my daily life, I should remember things like doing assessments with teamwork and working out by myself and it's important for me, so I take notes.

something 应改为复数 things，表示多项内容；workout 应改为动名词 working out；importantly 是副词，应改为形容词 important；句子末尾不完整，补充完整。

× In my daily life, I should remember something like doing assessments with teamwork and workout by myself and it's importantly for me, so I take notes or.

✓ In my daily life, I should remember things like doing assessments with teamwork and working out by myself and it's important for me, so I take notes.

importantly 是副词，修饰动词或形容词，这里应使用形容词 important 来修饰主语 it's。

× In my daily life, I should remember something like doing assessments with teamwork and workout by myself and it's importantly for me, so I take notes or.

✓ In my daily life, I should remember things like doing assessments with teamwork and working out by myself, and it's important for me, so I take notes.

句子结构不完整，缺少连接词和完整表达，需调整使句子通顺完整。

× Yeah, I often remember things like taking notes on tablet or setting reminders. So my cell phones, it's a great way to help me remember important things and.

✓ Yeah, I often remember things like taking notes on my tablet or setting reminders on my cell phone. It's a great way to help me remember important things.

tablet 前应加物主代词 my；cell phones 应为单数 my cell phone，因为通常指个人手机；句子末尾不完整，需补充完整。

× Yeah, I often remember things like taking notes on tablet or setting reminders. So my cell phones, it's a great way to help me remember important things and.

✓ Yeah, I often remember things like taking notes on my tablet or setting reminders on my cell phone. It's a great way to help me remember important things.

句子末尾不完整，and 后无内容，需删除或补充完整，使句子完整通顺。