Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，且语言不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达方式。

例: To be honest, I am not very good at memorising things, so I usually write important tasks on my phone to remind myself what needs to be done.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，并且使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I have. For example, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which made me feel embarrassed. Since then, I have been writing important dates on my phone to remind myself.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且有重复词汇。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: I need to remember many things daily, such as my grocery shopping list, important tasks, homework, and deadlines. I usually save them on my phone or laptop to avoid forgetting.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用更简洁的句子结构，并注意代词和冠词的正确使用。

例: I usually rely on my phone to remind me of important things. For example, if I set a reminder for a friend's birthday, I will know in advance and prepare a gift.

× I don't have good memory uh, but to solve this problem, I usually keep my important things down on my phone uh, to easily check that I still have things to uh, to should be done so.

✓ I don't have a good memory, uh, but to solve this problem, I usually keep my important things down on my phone, uh, to easily check that I still have things to, uh, to be done.

这里“memory”是不可数名词，前面需要加冠词“a”表示“一种好的记忆力”。

× Yes definitely I have and once there's one time I forget.

✓ Yes, definitely I have, and once there was one time I forgot.

这里描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去时态，“forget”应改为“forgot”，“there's”应改为“there was”。

× I forgot one of my best friend's birthday.

✓ I forgot one of my best friend's birthdays.

“birthday”应使用复数形式“birthdays”，因为指的是朋友的生日之一。

× I just jogged important things down and on my phone to remind me later.

✓ I just jotted important things down on my phone to remind me later.

“jogged”是“慢跑”的过去式，正确表达应为“jotted down”，意为“记下”。

× Well, I have a lot of thing need to remember, just like, you know, shopping my my grocery shopping list or my important task, my homework, my deadline, such as things.

✓ Well, I have a lot of things I need to remember, just like, you know, my grocery shopping list or my important tasks, my homework, my deadlines, such things.

“thing”应为复数形式“things”，同理“task”和“deadline”也应为复数形式。

× So I just kept them on on my cell phone or on my laptop in to prevent I don't forget any of them.

✓ So I just keep them on my cell phone or on my laptop to prevent forgetting any of them.

这里描述的是习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“keep”，且“in to prevent I don't forget”结构不正确，应改为“to prevent forgetting”。

× So I just kept them on on my cell phone or on my laptop in to prevent I don't forget any of them.

✓ So I just keep them on my cell phone or on my laptop to prevent me from forgetting any of them.

“in to prevent I don't forget”结构错误，应改为“to prevent me from forgetting”，正确使用介词短语。

× if I set my one of my friend's birthday, I, I would know before it and get ready for, for him or her's birthday gifts.

✓ If I set one of my friend's birthdays, I would know beforehand and get ready for his or her birthday gifts.

“my one of my friend's birthday”结构重复且错误，应简化为“one of my friend's birthdays”；“before it”应改为“beforehand”；“him or her's”错误，正确为“his or her”。