Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达稍显不自然，且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使表达更流畅自然。

例: I think I'm quite good at remembering important things, but I often forget minor details in my daily life.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和句式，避免重复和语法错误。

例: Yes, I once forgot to bring a spare pen during the CET 6 exam, which caused me some trouble.

提案: 回答内容重复且表达不够简洁。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复同一信息。

例: I usually have many tasks each day, so I write reminders on my phone to keep track of them.

提案: 回答中重复前文内容，缺乏丰富细节。建议增加具体细节，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I write important things on my phone, and if they are very important, I write them twice to make sure I don't forget.

× Well, actually I really forget the important things, but I remember once during the CET 6 examination, I forgot to prepare a spare pen in the examination.

✓ Well, actually I really forgot the important things, but I remember once during the CET 6 examination, I forgot to prepare a spare pen in the examination.

这里的动作发生在过去，所以动词应该用过去式。forget的过去式是forgot。

× Most of time I'm good at memorizing the important things, but I usually forget the small things in my daily life.

✓ Most of the time I'm good at memorizing the important things, but I usually forget the small things in my daily life.

短语中缺少定冠词“the”，正确表达是“Most of the time”，表示大多数时间。

× so I just write them on my phone to remind me so that I can remind them in my daily life.

✓ so I just write them on my phone to remind myself so that I can remember them in my daily life.

这里“remind me”应改为“remind myself”，因为是自己提醒自己；后半句“remind them”应改为“remember them”，因为是记住事情。