Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但有些语法错误和表达不够简洁。建议注意句子结构，避免重复使用“where”，并且注意名词所有格的正确使用。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget where I put my phone or keys, and sometimes I can't remember the names of new friends. Therefore, I usually use a memo app to help me remember important information.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但语法和表达不够准确。建议注意时态和介词的正确使用，同时避免句子过长，适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, last year I forgot my best friend's birthday because I was very busy with my work tasks. After that, I apologized and gave her some gifts. Now, we are still good friends.

提案: 回答中句子结构混乱，缺少连接词，表达不够清晰。建议分句表达，使用连接词如“because”、“so”来增强逻辑性，并注意动词形式。

例: I need to remember the deadlines for my professional assignments because they are very important for my studies. Also, I have to check my email on time so that I don't miss any important information.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，缺少连接词，且有语法错误。建议使用连词如“so that”来连接句子，并注意介词使用。

例: I usually use an app on my phone and sometimes set an alarm so that I don't miss important events.

× Sometimes I forget where my phone and where my keys and sometimes I can't remember my new friends names very well.

✓ Sometimes I forget where my phone is and where my keys are, and sometimes I can't remember my new friends' names very well.

这里缺少了动词，导致句子结构不完整；另外，'new friends names' 应该是复数所有格，正确形式是 'new friends' names'。建议在提到多个朋友的名字时使用复数所有格形式。

× Yes, last year I forgot my best friend's birthday because that time I was very busy for doing my tasks at work.

✓ Yes, last year I forgot my best friend's birthday because at that time I was very busy doing my tasks at work.

'for doing' 用法不正确，应该直接用动名词 'doing' 表示原因。'that time' 前应加介词 'at' 表示具体时间点。

× And then I apologized to her and gave her some gifts and now we also good friends.

✓ And then I apologized to her and gave her some gifts, and now we are also good friends.

缺少系动词 'are'，导致句子不完整。'we also good friends' 应为 'we are also good friends'。

× I need to remember my professional assignments deadline I think is very important for my study life and then I need to remember check my e-mail on time and it can avoid missing some important information.

✓ I need to remember my professional assignment deadlines; I think they are very important for my study life. Then I need to remember to check my e-mail on time so I can avoid missing some important information.

'assignments deadline' 数量不匹配，应为复数 'assignment deadlines'。'remember check' 应为 'remember to check'。句子结构需要调整以表达清晰。

× I usually use the app in phone and sometimes set an alarm to remind me avoid me missing some important events.

✓ I usually use the app on my phone and sometimes set an alarm to remind me to avoid missing some important events.

'in phone' 应为 'on my phone'。'remind me avoid me missing' 结构错误，应为 'remind me to avoid missing'。需要添加介词和不定式以使句子通顺。