Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“not sure always good”和“for remember the detail numbers”。建议你使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法结构，使回答更流畅。

例: I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially detailed numbers. For example, nowadays we often need to remember different passwords, but I find it quite difficult to remember them correctly.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“haven't forgot”和“four important things”。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，同时使句子更简洁明了。

例: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I usually write notes to remind myself or ask my friends to remind me. So, even if I forget something, I remember important things well.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议明确列举具体事项，并使用连贯的句子表达。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things. For example, I have to remember the times to take my children to school and pick them up. Also, I need to keep track of my appointments.

提案: 回答中有严重语法和表达错误，句子不完整且难以理解。建议使用简单清晰的句子，明确表达记忆方法。

例: To remember important things, I usually take notes because it's a simple and reliable method. Sometimes, I also ask my friends to remind me about important matters.

× Well, I'm not sure always good at memorizing things, especially for remember the detail numbers.

✓ Well, I'm not always good at memorizing things, especially remembering the detailed numbers.

句子中“I'm not sure always good”语序错误，应为“I'm not always good”。此外，“for remember”应改为动名词形式“remembering”，且“detail numbers”应为形容词形式“detailed numbers”。

× For instance, in today's society we sometimes need to remember different password, but I feel very struggling for it remember them correctly.

✓ For instance, in today's society we sometimes need to remember different passwords, but I find it very difficult to remember them correctly.

“password”应为复数形式“passwords”，属于单复数错误。短语“feel very struggling for it remember”结构不正确，应改为“find it very difficult to remember”。

× No, I haven't forgot some important things, because four important things I sometimes write down a note to remind me or inform friends to remind me.

✓ No, I haven't forgotten some important things, because for important things I sometimes write down a note to remind myself or ask friends to remind me.

“haven't forgot”应为“haven't forgotten”，过去分词形式错误。数字“four”应为介词“for”。“remind me”前应加反身代词“myself”。

× No, I haven't forgot some important things, because four important things I sometimes write down a note to remind me or inform friends to remind me.

✓ No, I haven't forgotten some important things, because for important things I sometimes write down a note to remind myself or ask friends to remind me.

“friends”复数形式正确，但“inform friends to remind me”表达不自然，应改为“ask friends to remind me”。

× For instance, in today's society we sometimes need to remember different password, but I feel very struggling for it remember them correctly.

✓ For instance, in today's society we sometimes need to remember different passwords, but I find it very difficult to remember them correctly.

“password”应为复数形式“passwords”，因为指多个密码。

× A fall remember the important things I always rely on take notes, which is a simple yet reliable way to remember important things another I sometimes ask my friends to remind me for some important things which can make me.

✓ To remember important things, I always rely on taking notes, which is a simple yet reliable way. Also, I sometimes ask my friends to remind me of some important things, which helps me.

原句结构混乱，缺少连贯性和正确的介词搭配。应调整句子结构，使表达清晰流畅。