Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget details that aren't important to me. However, I try to focus on remembering essential information to manage my daily tasks effectively.

提案: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'vacuum' và nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và có cấu trúc tốt hơn với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ.

例: Yes, I once forgot an important appointment a few years ago. Although I can't recall all the details clearly, I remember feeling quite stressed because it affected my schedule.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và chính tả, ví dụ như 'A to do list' nên là 'a to-do list' và 'forgetting employee' có thể là lỗi đánh máy. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng từ nối để liên kết ý tốt hơn.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to stay organized and manage my time well. For instance, I keep a to-do list to prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important duties. Also, I make sure to remember any homework I have to complete that day.

提案: Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác. Bạn nên dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm rõ cách bạn ghi nhớ.

例: I usually write important things down on paper because writing helps me remember them more easily. Additionally, I review my notes regularly to ensure I don't forget any tasks.

× Not really, not all the time and also I always forget everything that not important to my life.

✓ Not really, not all the time, and also I always forget everything that is not important to my life.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' in the relative clause 'that is not important to my life'. Without 'is', the clause is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, I had an experience like that one, although I don't really remember all the details clearly.

✓ Yes, I have had an experience like that one, although I don't really remember all the details clearly.

The present perfect tense 'have had' is more appropriate here because the experience is relevant to the present conversation. Using simple past 'had' is less suitable when the time is not specified or the experience affects the present.

× It was quite a long time ago, so some parts are a bit vacuum in my mind.

✓ It was quite a long time ago, so some parts are a bit vague in my mind.

The word 'vacuum' is a noun and incorrectly used as an adjective here. The correct adjective to describe unclear or missing memories is 'vague'. Replacing 'vacuum' with 'vague' corrects the meaning and grammar.

× For example, keeping A to do list help me prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting employee.

✓ For example, keeping a to-do list helps me prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important things.

The phrase 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with lowercase and hyphens. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'keeping a to-do list'. The word 'employee' is incorrect in context; it should be 'important things' or similar to fit the meaning.

× I will write it down to the paper and when I write it I will remember it easier.

✓ I will write it down on the paper, and when I write it, I will remember it more easily.

The correct preposition with 'write down' and 'paper' is 'on', not 'to'. Also, 'easier' is an adjective and should be replaced with the adverb 'more easily' to modify the verb 'remember'. Adding commas improves sentence clarity.