Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a direct response to the question, then add specific supporting details without redundancy. Also, avoid trailing off at the end of your sentences.

例: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, during my studies, I was able to remember important facts and details accurately, which helped me perform well in exams.

提案: Your answer is a bit vague and repetitive. Try to give a clear, direct answer first, then provide a specific example or reason. Avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to improve coherence.

例: No, I rarely forget important things like birthdays or special occasions because I have a strong memory and I usually make notes to remind myself.

提案: Your answer is generally good but incomplete at the end. Make sure to finish your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about how you remind yourself.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks like planning my study schedule and managing work responsibilities. For instance, since I am preparing to migrate for better opportunities, I stay focused and work hard every day to achieve my goal. Additionally, I use reminders on my phone to keep track of my tasks.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'and all'.

例: I usually use a reminder app on my phone to keep track of important dates like birthdays. Additionally, I make to-do lists for my tasks, which help me stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything.

× I remember during my studies I used to be good at memorizing things and also remembering them and.

✓ I remember during my studies I used to be good at memorizing things and also remembering them.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'and' which creates a sentence fragment. Removing the final 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× Uh, well as I remember, no, I don't usually forget birthdays or specific dates or a special occasions.

✓ Uh, well as I remember, no, I don't usually forget birthdays or specific dates or special occasions.

The phrase 'a special occasions' incorrectly uses the singular article 'a' with the plural noun 'occasions'. Removing 'a' corrects the noun phrase.

× For example, since I am preparing to migrate for better opportunity, I have to stay focused and work hard every day to achieve my goal.

✓ For example, since I am preparing to migrate for a better opportunity, I have to stay focused and work hard every day to achieve my goal.

The phrase 'for better opportunity' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'better opportunity' because it refers to a singular countable noun.

× I usually use an app called Reminder in my phone.

✓ I usually use an app called Reminder on my phone.

The correct preposition to indicate something contained or accessible via a device is 'on' rather than 'in'.

× It reminds me special location occasions like birthdays and all.

✓ It reminds me of special occasions like birthdays and so on.

The phrase 'reminds me special location occasions' is incorrect. The verb 'remind' requires the preposition 'of' before the object. Also, 'location occasions' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'special occasions' is appropriate. 'And all' is informal; 'and so on' is clearer.

× Additionally, I always remind myself.

✓ Additionally, I always remind myself of important things.

The sentence 'I always remind myself.' is incomplete because it lacks an object. Adding 'of important things' completes the thought.