Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid starting with 'Things no.' Instead, begin directly with your opinion. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and vary your vocabulary slightly.

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget information easily. For example, I often misplace my keys or other small items, which makes it difficult to remember where I put them.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use past tense consistently and link your ideas more clearly. Also, try to express your feelings more naturally and avoid redundancy.

例: Last weekend, before my test started, I forgot my ID card and couldn't remember where I had put it. I felt very nervous because I thought I wouldn't be allowed to take the exam. Fortunately, I eventually found it under my desk.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Use plural forms correctly and link your ideas with appropriate connectors. Also, avoid minor errors like 'phones' instead of 'phone'.

例: I need to remember the tasks I have to complete each day, such as work assignments or appointments. Additionally, I try to keep track of important things like my phone and the places I need to visit.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organise your ideas logically, use correct tenses, and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I always write down what I need to do and the things I need to buy. This method is very useful for me to remember important tasks and errands.

× Things no.

✓ No, things.

The original sentence 'Things no.' is incorrect because the word order is wrong and it lacks a verb or auxiliary to form a proper response. The correct form is 'No, things.' which is a short negative answer to the question 'Are you good at memorising things?'. This correction addresses the sentence structure and clarity.

× Before the start of my test last weekend I forgot my ID card and I couldn't remember where I put it.

✓ Before the start of my test last weekend, I forgot my ID card and couldn't remember where I had put it.

The sentence contains a past tense sequence where 'forgot' and 'couldn't remember' are in simple past, but 'put' should be in past perfect ('had put') to indicate the action happened before the forgetting. This clarifies the timeline of events.

× I feel very nervous because I think I can't take part in this exam and finally I find it was under my desk.

✓ I felt very nervous because I thought I couldn't take part in this exam, and finally I found it was under my desk.

The sentence mixes present tense ('feel', 'think') with past events ('forgot', 'couldn't'). Since the event happened in the past, all verbs should be in past tense to maintain consistency.

× I think I need to remember that task I have to complete each day, such as work assignment or appointment.

✓ I think I need to remember the tasks I have to complete each day, such as work assignments or appointments.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular nouns 'task', 'work assignment', and 'appointment' when referring to multiple items. Using plural forms 'tasks', 'work assignments', and 'appointments' is appropriate here to match the context of multiple daily responsibilities.

× I also try to keep track of important things like my phones and where I need to go.

✓ I also try to keep track of important things like my phone and where I need to go.

The word 'phones' is plural but usually a person has one phone. Using the singular 'phone' is more natural unless the speaker has multiple phones. This correction aligns with typical usage.

× I always write down what I need to do and write down what I need to buy I will I need to go, so it was very useful for me to remember things.

✓ I always write down what I need to do, what I need to buy, and where I need to go, so it is very useful for me to remember things.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. The phrase 'I will I need to go' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunctions and structure to clearly list the things written down and maintains present tense for habitual action.