Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
No, I'm not very good at memorizing things nowadays. Actually I have a good memory when I was a children, but in recent years it has gradually faded. For example, I often forget where I put my keys.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
No, actually I rarely forget important things because I always put them on my calendar apps. For example, last week I attended a significant meetings. I didn't miss it due to my calendar.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
In real life, it's important to remember to stay organized and manage time efficiently. For example, keeping A to do list helps me prioritize tasks and avoiding avoid forgetting important commitments.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
Will I always make a list to organize my schedule or important things like meetings or assignment guidelines? For example, if I have a insignificant meeting next week, I will put it on my calendar apps to remind me.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答时语法和用词需更准确，避免语法错误如“when I was a children”，并且回答应更简洁自然。可以用更地道的表达来描述记忆力的变化。
例: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things these days. I used to have a good memory when I was a child, but it has gradually declined over the years. For instance, I often forget where I put my keys.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“a significant meetings”，应注意单复数一致。回答可以更自然流畅，避免重复“actually”。
例: No, I rarely forget important things because I always use calendar apps to remind me. For example, last week I attended an important meeting and didn't miss it thanks to my calendar.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，如“avoiding avoid”，应注意句子结构和拼写。回答应更具体，直接回答问题并用连词连接细节。
例: In daily life, I need to remember to stay organized and manage my time well. For example, keeping a to-do list helps me prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important commitments.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“Will I always make a list”，应使用陈述句。注意冠词使用，如“a insignificant meeting”应为“an insignificant meeting”。
例: I always make a list to organize my schedule and important things like meetings or assignment guidelines. For example, if I have an insignificant meeting next week, I will put it on my calendar app to remind me.
文法
× Actually I have a good memory when I was a children, but in recent years it has gradually faded.
✓ Actually I had a good memory when I was a child, but in recent years it has gradually faded.
children 是复数形式，表示多个孩子，而这里指的是单数的“我”小时候，应该用单数形式 child。
× For example, last week I attended a significant meetings.
✓ For example, last week I attended a significant meeting.
meetings 是复数形式，但前面有不定冠词 a，a 只能修饰单数名词，故应改为单数 meeting。
× keeping A to do list helps me prioritize tasks and avoiding avoid forgetting important commitments.
✓ keeping a to-do list helps me prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important commitments.
to do list 是单数名词，前面冠词应为小写 a，且避免重复使用 avoid。
× Will I always make a list to organize my schedule or important things like meetings or assignment guidelines?
✓ I will always make a list to organize my schedule or important things like meetings or assignment guidelines.
此句中 Will 用法错误，表示习惯动作应使用陈述句而非疑问句，故去掉 Will。
× if I have a insignificant meeting next week, I will put it on my calendar apps to remind me.
✓ if I have an insignificant meeting next week, I will put it on my calendar app to remind me.
insignificant 以元音音素开头，前面冠词应为 an；calendar apps 应为单数 app，因为通常指一个应用程序。
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