Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用简单且正确的句子结构，直接回答问题，并避免重复和不连贯的表达。

例: I used to be good at memorising things, but now I find it harder to remember things clearly.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I often forget important things, so I usually write them down or record reminders on my phone to avoid forgetting.

提案: 回答内容具体，但句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子，使用连接词使表达更清晰。

例: Recently, I need to remember the exact class times because I teach different students every day.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确说明方法并解释原因。

例: I think the best way to remember important things is to set reminders on my phone because it alerts me when I need to do something.

× I have to say I used good at memory things and but now I think my brain isn't working at all.

✓ I have to say I used to be good at memorising things, but now I think my brain isn't working at all.

原句中“used good at memory things”结构不正确，应该使用“used to be good at memorising things”来表达过去习惯。这里“good”是形容词，需搭配“be”动词使用，且“memory things”应改为动名词形式“memorising things”。

× So I try to write down them or just record them on my phone in case of I forget.

✓ So I try to write them down or just record them on my phone in case I forget.

“write down them”中“them”应放在动词后面，正确表达为“write them down”。另外，“in case of I forget”结构错误，正确用法是“in case I forget”，不需要“of”。

× So I try to write down them or just record them on my phone in case of I forget.

✓ So I try to write them down or just record them on my phone in case I forget.

“in case of I forget”中“of”是不必要的介词，应去掉，正确表达为“in case I forget”。

× In fact, recently I have to remember the class time because every day I have different students to have class, so I have to remember what the exact time.

✓ In fact, recently I have to remember the class times because every day I have different students to have class, so I have to remember the exact time.

“the class time”应为复数“class times”，因为每天有不同的上课时间。

× I think the best way is to record the reminders on my because the can't notice you what time to do something.

✓ I think the best way is to record the reminders on my phone because it can't notify you what time to do something.

原句中“on my”缺少名词，应补充“phone”。“the can't notice you”结构错误，应为“it can't notify you”，使用正确的代词和动词。