Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“that's really do well”应改为“who is really good at”。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，同时补充更多具体细节，使回答更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, when I started my job last year, I could clearly remember the tasks my previous colleagues had completed, which helped me continue their work smoothly.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议在回答时完整表达事件经过，使用连贯的句子，并补充具体细节，使内容更丰富且逻辑清晰。

例: Yes, I once forgot to pay my tuition fee last year. As a result, I missed the deadline and couldn't get my Confirmation of Enrolment from the university, which forced me to return from Australia to China.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议直接回答问题，避免使用口头语“Uh”，并补充更多具体内容，使回答更完整自然。

例: Currently, I am not working full-time, so I don't have many things to remember daily. However, I always make sure to eat meals on time because my mom reminds me to maintain a healthy routine.

提案: 回答中存在重复和口头语，表达不够流畅。建议减少口头语，使用连贯的句子，并详细说明第二种方法，增强回答的完整性和自然度。

例: I usually remember important things in two ways. First, I write them down in my memo because it's easy and convenient to check. Second, I try to keep the information in my mind by repeating it to myself regularly.

× I still can remember what exactly my previous colleagues has done and I can use the.

✓ I still can remember what exactly my previous colleagues have done and I can use them.

这里的主语是复数形式的“colleagues”，谓语动词应该用复数形式“have”，而不是单数形式“has”。此外，句子末尾缺少宾语，应该补充“them”来指代前文提到的内容。

× I had forgotten a significant thing last year.

✓ I forgot a significant thing last year.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，使用一般过去时即可，不需要过去完成时“had forgotten”。过去完成时通常用于描述过去某一时间之前已经完成的动作。

× I still can remember what exactly my previous colleagues has done and I can use the.

✓ I can still remember exactly what my previous colleagues have done and I can use them.

“still can remember”中“can”是情态动词，后面动词用原形“remember”，位置调整为“can still remember”更自然。

× I still can remember what exactly my previous colleagues has done and I can use the.

✓ I still can remember what exactly my previous colleagues have done and I can use them.

句尾缺少宾语，应该用复数代词“them”指代“previous colleagues have done”的内容。

× I was not. I can't get involved and get the Coe from the university and I have to move from Australia to China and.

✓ I was not able to get involved and get the CoE from the university, so I had to move from Australia to China.

原句结构不完整，断句不清晰，缺少连贯的表达。需要补充“was not able to”表示能力不足，连接词“so”表示因果关系，句尾去掉多余的“and”。

× I can't get involved and get the Coe from the university and I have to move from Australia to China and.

✓ I couldn't get involved and get the CoE from the university, so I had to move from Australia to China.

时态应与上下文一致，使用过去时“couldn't”和“had to”。句尾多余的“and”应去掉。

× currently I'm not working as a like a full time employee in a company, so I don't have much to remember in my daily life.

✓ Currently, I'm not working as a full-time employee in a company, so I don't have much to remember in my daily life.

“as a like a”中“like a”多余，应去掉。

× The only thing that I need to pay attention to is the time of eating, Uh, because my mom.

✓ The only thing that I need to pay attention to is the time of eating, because of my mom.

“because my mom”不完整，应该用介词短语“because of my mom”表示原因。

× First, I prefer to write it down on my memo because it's approachable and convenient for me to check, Uh.

✓ First, I prefer to write it down in my memo because it's accessible and convenient for me to check.

“write it down on my memo”中介词应为“in”，表示写入备忘录。单词“approachable”用错，应为“accessible”表示易于访问。

× Secondly, I'd like to, uh, remember the things on my mind and keep giving myself uh.

✓ Secondly, I'd like to remember the things in my mind and keep reminding myself.

“remember the things on my mind”应为“in my mind”，表示在脑海中。句尾“keep giving myself uh”不完整，应改为“keep reminding myself”，表示不断提醒自己。