Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且内容丰富，但可以更简洁，避免列举过多例子，且连接词使用不足。建议在回答时使用连接词使内容更连贯，同时控制句子数量在5句以内。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I can recall important moments from my life clearly. For example, I remember my job promotion and the first game my mother gave me, which are special to me.

提案: 回答内容具体，但语法和表达有些小错误，如“Though she forgive me”应为“Though she forgave me”。建议注意时态和语法的准确性，同时使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I once forgot my mom's birthday because I was very busy at work. However, I remembered it the next day and quickly bought her favorite flowers and a necklace to apologize, which made her forgive me.

提案: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用连接词如“such as”或“for example”来增强连贯性，同时注意时间表达的准确性，如“by 6:00 on Saturday”。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember several important tasks, such as taking my kids with me before leaving, feeding my cat, and submitting my report by 6:00 on Saturday.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“both related to us”应为“are related to both of us”，“writing the things like common buy cat food”表达不准确。建议加强语法准确性，使用更自然的表达，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

例: I use a few tricks to remember important things. For example, I ask my husband to remind me about shared tasks, such as booking tickets in advance. Also, I stick notes on my laptop to remind me of daily chores like buying cat food.

× Though she forgive me, I still felt very bad those days.

✓ Though she forgave me, I still felt very bad those days.

这里的动词时态错误，主句是过去时态，表示过去发生的事情，so 'forgive' 应该用过去式 'forgave'。建议动词时态要与句子时间保持一致。

× I stick notes on my laptop or writing the things like common buy cat food.

✓ I stick notes on my laptop or write things like commonly buying cat food.

这里的动词形式不一致，'stick' 是动词原形，后面应该用并列的动词原形 'write'，而不是动名词 'writing'。另外，'common buy cat food' 语法不正确，改为 'commonly buying cat food' 更合适。建议并列动词保持形式一致，短语表达要符合习惯用法。