Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
Well, I think I'm good at memorizing things when I'm a child, but when I'm grown to an adult, I just became, I just became bad at memory things. I have bad memory now. I just feel that I'm old and my brain is bad.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yes, I have. When I'm in the primary school there is and there was an exam in one afternoon, but I forgot the exam and I went to bed to sleep. I just totally forgotten the whole thing and.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
Well, umm, I need to remember the glasses position that I was umm, put last night. And I'm a careless person so I usually put my glasses everywhere, like the tables and the bed and umm, in my bags.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
Yeah, I usually use the method that writing A to do list to help me remember important things, like something I need to do tomorrow or important things I need to do. Yeah, that's make me remember, help me.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且内容重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词汇。
例: I was good at memorizing things when I was a child, but now as an adult, I find it harder to remember things because I am often busy and distracted.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中时态混乱，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态，完整表达事件，并适当使用连接词使句子连贯。
例: Yes, I once forgot an important exam during primary school. I didn't realize it was that day and went to sleep instead.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中有较多口头语，表达不够流畅。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的词汇描述，并且句子结构更清晰。
例: I need to remember where I put my glasses because I often leave them in different places like on tables, beds, or in my bag.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中语法错误和重复较多，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的句型，避免重复，并且使句子更流畅。
例: I usually write a to-do list to help me remember important tasks, especially things I need to do the next day.
文法
× Well, I think I'm good at memorizing things when I'm a child, but when I'm grown to an adult, I just became, I just became bad at memory things.
✓ Well, I think I was good at memorizing things when I was a child, but when I grew up to an adult, I just became bad at remembering things.
这里时态使用错误。描述过去的情况时，应使用过去时态，如"was"和"grew up"，而不是现在时"I'm"和"grown"。此外，"bad at memory things"表达不正确，应改为"bad at remembering things"。
× I just feel that I'm old and my brain is bad.
✓ I just feel that I'm old and my brain is not good.
"bad"用来形容大脑不合适，通常用"not good"或"not working well"更自然。
× When I'm in the primary school there is and there was an exam in one afternoon, but I forgot the exam and I went to bed to sleep.
✓ When I was in primary school, there was an exam one afternoon, but I forgot about the exam and went to bed to sleep.
"When I'm in the primary school"时态错误，应为过去时"When I was in primary school"。"there is and there was"重复且混乱，应只用过去时"there was"。此外，"forgot the exam"应为"forgot about the exam"更自然。
× I just totally forgotten the whole thing and.
✓ I just totally forgot the whole thing.
"forgotten"是过去分词，需与助动词连用，这里应使用简单过去时"forgot"。
× I need to remember the glasses position that I was umm, put last night.
✓ I need to remember the position where I put my glasses last night.
"the glasses position that I was put"结构不正确，应改为"the position where I put my glasses"。
× Yeah, that's make me remember, help me.
✓ Yeah, that helps me remember and helps me.
"that's make"主谓不一致，应为"that helps"。此外，句子结构不完整，需补充"and helps me"。
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