Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết hỗ trợ. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things that interest me. However, I sometimes struggle to remember names unless I write them down. Therefore, I usually set reminders to help me recall important information.

提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ thừa như "uh" và lặp lại từ không cần thiết. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy và cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things quite often. For instance, when I go shopping, I sometimes forget to buy essentials like milk and bread because I don't write a shopping list on my phone.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi sai như "birthdays are anniversaries". Hãy cố gắng mở rộng câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

例: On a daily basis, I need to remember many things such as homework, tasks, and personal events. I also make sure not to forget important dates like birthdays and anniversaries by setting alarms and reminders.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, "set a line" không đúng, bạn nên nói "set an alarm". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết logic.

例: I usually jot down important things on my phone or in a notebook. Sometimes, I set alarms or reminders to help me remember tasks, which helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

× I have a good memory for things that interest me and sometimes I also struggle to remember certain names all days unless I write them down and I so to so I need to set a line to recall me what I need to do.

✓ I have a good memory for things that interest me, but sometimes I also struggle to remember certain names every day unless I write them down, so I need to set a line to remind me what I need to do.

The phrase 'all days' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'every day' to indicate frequency. Also, 'recall me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'remind me' when someone or something helps you remember. The sentence structure is complex and needs punctuation for clarity.

× I, I forgot to buy necessary grocery like milk and bread, uh, because I don't write them on the phone app and take a note.

✓ I forgot to buy necessary groceries like milk and bread because I didn't write them on the phone app or take a note.

The verb tense should be consistent in past tense when referring to a past event. 'Don't write' should be 'didn't write' to match the past context. Also, 'grocery' should be plural 'groceries' when referring to multiple items.

× I forgot to buy necessary grocery like milk and bread, uh, because I don't write them on the phone app and take a note.

✓ I forgot to buy necessary groceries like milk and bread because I didn't write them on the phone app or take a note.

'Grocery' is a singular noun, but here it refers to multiple items, so the plural form 'groceries' is correct.

× On a daily basis I need to remember a lot of things like homework, task and personal events.

✓ On a daily basis, I need to remember a lot of things like homework, tasks, and personal events.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the plural context of 'a lot of things'. Also, commas are needed for clarity.

× So I usually set alarm, set reminders to make sure I don't forget to do anything and.

✓ So I usually set alarms and reminders to make sure I don't forget to do anything.

The phrase 'set alarm' should be 'set alarms' (plural) and 'set reminders' with 'and' to connect them properly. The sentence was incomplete and needed correction for clarity.

× I usually jot down important things in the phone or in the notebook and sometimes I set a line set alarm or reminder to recall me and make sure that I don't forget anything and this helped me to stay overnight and manage my time effectively.

✓ I usually jot down important things on the phone or in a notebook, and sometimes I set an alarm or reminder to remind me and make sure that I don't forget anything. This helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

The preposition 'in the phone' should be 'on the phone'. 'Set a line' is incorrect; it should be 'set an alarm or reminder'. 'Recall me' is incorrect; it should be 'remind me'. 'Helped me to stay overnight' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'helps me stay organized' is more appropriate. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed punctuation and restructuring.