Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。簡潔で明確な文を作る練習をしましょう。例えば、主語と動詞を正しく使い、冗長な表現を避けることが重要です。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it difficult to concentrate for a long time.

提案: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。過去形や現在形の使い分けを練習し、簡潔に答えることを心がけましょう。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as appointments or deadlines.

提案: 回答が繰り返しで冗長です。主題文を明確にし、理由や具体例を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。

例: I need to remember my study schedule and important topics to prepare well for the university admission exam.

提案: 文が断片的で不自然です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より流暢に話す練習をしましょう。

例: I often use the notes app on my smartphone to remember important things because I always have it with me.

× I'm not I'm not good at memorizing so I was so tired to study study some sense to get.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing, so I was so tired from studying for some time.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'to study' instead of the past tense or gerund form 'studying' to indicate the action that caused tiredness. Also, 'study some sense to get' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction uses 'studying' to express the continuous action that caused tiredness, which is appropriate in past tense context.

× Maybe I have it but. I forgot something to important things so I'm not remember it.

✓ Maybe I have, but I forgot some important things, so I don't remember them.

The sentence incorrectly mixes tenses and uses incorrect verb forms. 'I forgot' is past tense and correct, but 'I'm not remember it' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't remember them' to match the present tense negative form. Also, 'something to important things' is ungrammatical; 'some important things' is correct.

× No. I need to study something to I need to study hard to pass the university's admission exam, so I need I need to remember all those things.

✓ No. I need to study hard to pass the university admission exam, so I need to remember all those things.

The phrase 'study something to I need to study hard' is redundant and ungrammatical. Also, 'university's admission exam' is better expressed as 'university admission exam' without the possessive. The correction removes redundancy and corrects the prepositional phrase.

× I often use my. Note in a smartphone because I always bring a smartphone so. Yeah.

✓ I often use the notes on my smartphone because I always carry it with me.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'my. Note in a smartphone' which is fragmented and unclear. 'Note' should be plural 'notes' and 'in a smartphone' should be 'on my smartphone'. Also, 'bring a smartphone' is better expressed as 'carry it with me' for clarity and naturalness.