Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding awkward phrases like 'help miracle information'. Use simpler and more accurate expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I consider myself good at memorising because I often use visualization techniques to remember information effectively.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, when I was young, I forgot some important study material during an exam, which affected my performance.

提案: Avoid repeating the same phrases and try to express your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule and routine. For instance, I keep track of appointments and tasks to stay organized.

提案: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrases. Try to speak clearly and use linking words to explain your method. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

例: I remember important things by keeping a very organized schedule and writing down all my appointments and tasks.

× I can remember all the things very well as I often use my visualization techniques to help miracle information.

✓ I can remember all the things very well as I often use my visualization techniques to help memorize information.

The verb 'miracle' is incorrect here; the correct verb form is 'memorize' to express the action of remembering information. Using the correct verb form improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, yes, I forget something important and when I was young, during my exam, I forget and they can't memorize something about my study that it was very important.

✓ Yes, yes, I forgot something important and when I was young, during my exam, I forgot and they couldn't memorize something about my study that was very important.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was young' and 'during my exam'. Also, 'can't' should be 'couldn't' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I usually go to myself schedule during my day and sometimes I forget some of my daily routine so I have to remember my daily.

✓ I usually follow my schedule during my day and sometimes I forget some of my daily routine so I have to remember it.

The phrase 'go to myself schedule' is incorrect; 'myself' is misused here. The correct expression is 'follow my schedule'. Also, 'remember my daily' is incomplete; it should be 'remember it' referring to the routine.

× I usually try to remember important things by using by using a very very organized schedule and write all my important things my and my important appointment during.

✓ I usually try to remember important things by using a very organized schedule and writing all my important things and my important appointments.

The phrase 'by using by using' is repetitive and incorrect. Also, 'write' should be 'writing' to maintain parallel structure after 'by using'. The phrase 'my important things my and my important appointment during' is unclear and corrected to 'all my important things and my important appointments' for clarity and grammatical correctness.