Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“memorizing”应为“memorising”，且表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember my friends' names and faces. I also enjoy playing memory games in my free time, which help to keep my mind sharp.

提案: 回答内容具体，但语法错误较多，如“forgot”应为“forget”，建议注意时态和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, last year I forgot my best friend's birthday, which surprised him a lot. I felt very guilty and sincerely apologized to him.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构不完整，建议使用连词连接句子，并具体说明如何帮助提高成绩。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like deadlines and assignments. This helps me complete my work on time and improve my grades effectively.

提案: 句子结构混乱，表达不自然，建议简化句子，使用恰当的连接词，并明确说明使用方法。

例: I usually use technology to remember important things, like setting reminders with my smartphone's assistant, Siri. Additionally, I write notes in my notebook and use a calendar to keep track of important dates, which helps me stay organized.

× I could easily recall my friends names and their faces.

✓ I could easily recall my friends' names and their faces.

这里的 "friends names" 应该使用所有格形式 "friends' names"，表示朋友们的名字。英语中复数名词所有格需要在复数名词后加撇号。

× he was so astonished that I could forgot that

✓ he was so astonished that I could forget that

这里的 "could forgot" 中 "forgot" 是过去式，应该用动词原形 "forget"，因为情态动词后面接动词原形。

× I could forgot that

✓ I could forget that

同上，情态动词后应接动词原形，不能用过去式。

× I need to remember my school work such as deadlines and school assignments for they could better improve my school grades and enhance my overall quality.

✓ I need to remember my school work such as deadlines and school assignments because they can better improve my school grades and enhance my overall quality.

这里的 "for" 用法不当，应该用 "because" 表示原因。

× By using technology is a crucial way to remember important things such as the smartphone's assistant Siri and additionally I prefer using notebook and the calendar to remember that so that they could better stable my ability in memorizing things.

✓ Using technology is a crucial way to remember important things such as the smartphone's assistant Siri, and additionally I prefer using a notebook and a calendar to remember things so that they can better stabilize my ability in memorizing things.

句首的 "By using technology is..." 结构不正确，应去掉 "By"。另外，"using notebook and the calendar" 应加冠词 "a notebook and a calendar"。"stable" 应改为动词 "stabilize"。