Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了过去和现在的对比，但语法错误影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式，例如使用过去时态描述过去的能力。

例: I used to be good at memorising things, but now I find it more difficult.

提案: 回答简短且有语法错误，'had forgot'应为'forgot'。建议使用正确的时态，并适当扩展细节，使回答更具体和连贯。

例: Yes, I once forgot an important exam, which was a terrible experience because I wasn't prepared.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地列举具体内容，并避免重复。

例: I need to remember daily routines and important deadlines to stay organized.

提案: 回答表达了方法，但时态混用且句子结构不够自然。建议统一时态，使用更自然的表达，并适当使用连接词。

例: I usually take notes and review them regularly; when I complete a task, I cross it out to keep track.

× In the past I can memorize things very clearly, but now I'm not very good at it.

✓ In the past I could memorize things very clearly, but now I'm not very good at it.

这里谈论过去的能力，应该用情态动词的过去式 'could'，而不是现在时 'can'。建议将 'can' 改为 'could'，以符合过去时态的语境。

× Yes, I had forgot one exam.

✓ Yes, I had forgotten one exam.

'had forgot' 是错误的过去完成时形式，正确的过去分词是 'forgotten'。建议将 'forgot' 改为 'forgotten'，以构成正确的过去完成时。

× I think there are something that I really have to remember.

✓ I think there is something that I really have to remember.

'something' 是不可数单数名词，前面应该用单数形式 'is'，而不是复数 'are'。建议将 'are' 改为 'is'，以保持主谓一致。

× Sometimes I would take some notes and I will review those notes and cross them out if I made one thing done.

✓ Sometimes I would take some notes and I will review those notes and cross them out if I have done something.

'made one thing done' 结构不正确，应该用完成时态表达已经完成的动作，建议改为 'have done something'，使句子更自然且语法正确。