Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use clearer sentence structures and correct grammar, for example, say "I studied elective subjects like Chinese history and biology in secondary school, which required good memory skills to achieve better grades." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I studied subjects like Chinese history and biology in secondary school. These subjects required me to remember a lot of information to perform well in exams.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, respond directly and clearly, for example: "No, I have never forgotten anything important because I am careful and usually write reminders to help me remember tasks." Also, avoid awkward phrases like "drop down in a note" and use correct verb forms.

例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I am careful and I write notes to remind myself of important tasks.

提案: Your answer is relevant and includes an example, but there are minor grammar and vocabulary issues. To improve, say "keeping a to-do list helps me prioritise tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibilities." Also, try to use linking words like "for instance" to make your answer more coherent.

例: In daily life, I need to remember to stay organised and manage my time well. For instance, keeping a to-do list helps me prioritise tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibilities.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. To improve, respond clearly and concisely, for example: "I usually write important things down in notes or type reminders on my phone, which helps me save time and stay organised." Avoid awkward phrases like "type on my to record me" and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

例: I usually write important things down in notes or type reminders on my phone, which helps me save time and stay organised.

× These subjects require a good memory skills that can have a better grade in the exam.

✓ These subjects require good memory skills to achieve better grades in the exam.

The phrase 'a good memory skills' is incorrect because 'skills' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, 'that can have a better grade' is awkward; it is better to say 'to achieve better grades'. The correction removes the article and adjusts the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I don't have that experience because I'm careful when I have used some important things and I will drop down in a note that can Remember Me to do the things and I always wanted to remember.

✓ No, I don't have that experience because I'm careful when I use important things and I write notes to remind me to do the things I want to remember.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and verb tenses. 'When I have used some important things' should be 'when I use important things' to match present tense. 'Drop down in a note' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write notes'. 'Remember Me' should be 'remind me'. Also, 'I always wanted to remember' should be 'I want to remember'. The correction fixes these issues for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× For example, keeping A to do list help me prioritise tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibility.

✓ For example, keeping a to-do list helps me prioritise tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibilities.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'keeping a to-do list'. 'Important responsibility' should be plural 'important responsibilities' to match the context. The correction addresses these article, verb agreement, and pluralization errors.

× For me I will write down in a note and also I will type on my to record me to do that serious things and also this can have a many time efficiency.

✓ For me, I write notes and also type reminders to help me do important things efficiently, which saves time.

The phrase 'write down in a note' is incorrect; it should be 'write notes'. 'Type on my' is incomplete and unclear; it is better to say 'type reminders'. 'To record me to do that serious things' is awkward and incorrect; 'to help me do important things' is clearer. 'This can have a many time efficiency' is ungrammatical; 'which saves time' is a better expression. The correction improves preposition use, clarity, and grammar.