Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“memory”应为“memorize”，“another things”应为“other things”，“typing or writing those informations”应为“typing or writing that information”。建议你注意动词形式和名词单复数的正确使用，同时简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I find it difficult to remember my friends' phone numbers or work-related information, so I usually write them down in my notes.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“do forgot”应为“did forget”，“I was for”不通顺，句子结构混乱。建议你练习使用正确的时态和连贯的句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更清晰。

例: Yes, I did forget something important when I was a child. I lost my keys after coming back from school, so I had to replace them, which was quite expensive.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达不准确的问题，如“from some information”不明确，“to every groceries items”应为“to every grocery item”。建议你使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达，同时注意名词单复数和介词的正确使用。

例: I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as important information, my work schedule, and the grocery items I need to buy.

提案: 回答中语法错误严重，如“Will just as I have mentioned before”不通顺，“I barely using handwriting or typing some mammals”表达错误且含义不明。建议你简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，明确表达你的记忆方法。

例: As I mentioned before, because I have a poor memory, I usually write down important things by hand or type them on my phone or laptop. This method works best for me.

× I always memory some things very hard, such as memorizing some telephone numbers from my friends or another things on my work, so I barely typing or writing those informations on my memos.

✓ I always have difficulty memorizing some things, such as telephone numbers from my friends or other things at my work, so I usually type or write that information in my memos.

原句中“another things”和“informations”使用了错误的复数形式。'another'后应接单数名词，'information'是不可数名词，不应加复数形式。应使用正确的单复数形式和不可数名词形式。

× I always memory some things very hard, such as memorizing some telephone numbers from my friends or another things on my work, so I barely typing or writing those informations on my memos.

✓ I always have difficulty memorizing some things, such as telephone numbers from my friends or other things at my work, so I usually type or write that information in my memos.

原句中“barely typing or writing”缺少助动词，应改为“I barely type or write”或“I usually type or write”。动词前需要正确的助动词或时态形式。

× such as memorizing some telephone numbers from my friends or another things on my work

✓ such as memorizing some telephone numbers from my friends or other things at my work

介词“on my work”用法不当，正确表达应为“at my work”，表示在工作地点。

× Yes I do forgot something important when I was a child I was for I forgot my keys after I went back from my school so I have to change a new one which cost me a lot.

✓ Yes, I did forget something important when I was a child. I forgot my keys after I came back from school, so I had to get a new one which cost me a lot.

原句中“do forgot”时态错误，应为“did forget”；“went back from my school”表达不自然，应为“came back from school”；“have to change a new one”时态和用词错误，应为“had to get a new one”。

× after I went back from my school

✓ after I came back from school

“went back from my school”表达不自然，通常用“come back from school”表示回到学校或回家。

× That's quite a lot of things I need to remember from some information, some schedules I need to do for each day's daily work, to every groceries items I need to purchase for my daily life.

✓ There are quite a lot of things I need to remember, such as some information, some schedules I need to follow for each day's work, and every grocery item I need to purchase for my daily life.

“groceries items”复数错误，应为“grocery items”；“some information”信息是不可数名词，不应加复数。

× some schedules I need to do for each day's daily work

✓ some schedules I need to follow for each day's work

“do for each day's daily work”表达不自然，通常用“follow schedules”更合适。

× Will just as I have mentioned before, due to my poor memorizing by my brain, I barely using handwriting or typing some mammals no matter on phones or on my laptops, so it is the best way for me.

✓ Well, just as I have mentioned before, due to my poor memory, I barely use handwriting or typing for notes, whether on phones or on my laptops, so it is the best way for me.

“I barely using”缺少助动词，应为“I barely use”；“memorizing by my brain”表达不自然，应改为“my poor memory”；“some mammals”应为“some memos”或“notes”，原词错误。

× I barely using handwriting or typing some mammals no matter on phones or on my laptops

✓ I barely use handwriting or typing for notes, whether on phones or on my laptops

“some mammals”拼写错误，应为“some memos”或“notes”；“no matter on phones or on my laptops”表达不自然，应为“whether on phones or on my laptops”。