Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'I don't good at memorizing things' nên sửa thành 'I'm not good at memorizing things'. Bạn cũng nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

例: I'm not very good at memorizing things, but I can remember small details and things around me quite well.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ như 'I I'. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và giải thích ngắn gọn về việc quên đồ quan trọng.

例: Yes, I have forgotten my phone before, so I had to call it to find it. I have also forgotten my book and bag sometimes, but those were not very important.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi như 'to do it' hay 'not forgotten anything'. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi chính tả như 'frog' thay vì 'problem'.

例: In my daily life, I usually make a checklist or set goals to avoid forgetting anything. Fortunately, I only forget small things or details, so it's not a big problem.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như câu bị ngắt quãng và sai thì. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý với nhau.

例: For important things like my laptop or phone, I usually put them in my bag and make sure I never leave them behind.

× I think I don't good at memorizing things but I can memorize a small thing and everything surrounding me.

✓ I think I am not good at memorizing things but I can memorize small things and everything surrounding me.

The modal verb 'don't' is incorrectly used here. The correct form is 'I am not good at' to express inability or lack of skill. Also, 'a small thing' should be plural 'small things' to match the context.

× Definitely I have forgotten my phone.

✓ Definitely, I have forgotten my phone.

A comma is needed after 'Definitely' to separate the introductory adverb from the main clause for clarity.

× So I I call for my phone to find it and for example I have forgotten my book, my bag, but they are not anything.

✓ So I call for my phone to find it. For example, I have forgotten my book or my bag, but they are not important.

The sentence has repetition ('I I') and run-on structure. It should be split into two sentences with proper punctuation. Also, 'they are not anything' is unclear; 'they are not important' is more appropriate.

× In my daily life I usually make a checklist or to do it to set a goal to not forgotten anything.

✓ In my daily life, I usually make a checklist or to-do list to set goals so I don't forget anything.

The phrase 'to do it' is incorrect; it should be 'to-do list'. Also, 'to not forgotten' is incorrect; the correct form is 'so I don't forget'. Commas are added for clarity.

× Luckily I have forgotten a small thing and small details, so it's not a big frog.

✓ Luckily, I have forgotten small things and small details, so it's not a big problem.

Comma needed after 'Luckily'. 'a small thing and small details' should be plural 'small things and small details'. 'big frog' is a typo; it should be 'big problem'.

× Important things such as laptop or my phone I usually. Put it in my bag and I don't. I never threw out.

✓ Important things such as my laptop or my phone, I usually put in my bag and I never throw them out.

The sentence is fragmented and has incorrect verb forms. 'I usually put it in my bag' is correct, but 'I don't. I never threw out' is incorrect; it should be 'I never throw them out'. Also, 'laptop' needs a possessive determiner 'my'.