Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Votre réponse manque de clarté et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez de formuler une phrase d'introduction claire et évitez les répétitions inutiles. Par exemple, utilisez une structure simple et correcte pour exprimer votre opinion.

例: I am not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget things every day.

提案: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et manque de cohérence. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour organiser vos idées et évitez les phrases incomplètes. Soyez précis dans vos exemples.

例: No, I usually write important events down on my phone and on notes so I don't forget them. For example, I didn't forget my IELTS speaking test.

提案: Votre réponse contient des erreurs de vocabulaire et de grammaire, et manque de clarté. Faites attention aux mots utilisés (par exemple, 'kids' au lieu de 'keys'). Utilisez des phrases simples et correctes pour exprimer vos idées.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember where I put my keys because I live alone and go to school. Forgetting them can be very stressful.

提案: Votre réponse est correcte mais trop courte et manque de détails. Ajoutez des informations supplémentaires et utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus fluide.

例: I usually use different methods to remember important things. For instance, I write notes on my phone and sometimes set reminders to help me.

× I think that I'm not good at memories, memorizing things because I forget every day something.

✓ I think that I'm not good at memorizing things because I forget something every day.

The word 'memories' is incorrectly used as a noun here; the correct form is the gerund 'memorizing' to express the action. Also, the phrase 'forget every day something' is awkward; it should be 'forget something every day' to follow correct English word order.

× No, when I have something important that will happen, usually write it down in multiple support like my phone and post it so I can't forget this event.

✓ No, when I have something important that will happen, I usually write it down on multiple supports like my phone and post-it notes so I can't forget this event.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to writing on a device or note. Also, 'multiple support' should be plural 'multiple supports' to indicate more than one medium. 'Post it' should be 'post-it notes' for clarity.

× For instance for my yellow speaking, yeah I didn't forget.

✓ For instance, for my yellow speaking test, yeah, I didn't forget.

The phrase 'yellow speaking' is unclear; adding 'test' clarifies the meaning. Commas are added for better sentence flow.

× In my daily life, what I need to remember is where I put my keys, for instance, because I really go to school and I live alone, so when I forget where I put my kids, it's quite frightening, even if I have friends can help me.

✓ In my daily life, what I need to remember is where I put my keys, for instance, because I really go to school and I live alone, so when I forget where I put my keys, it's quite frightening, even if I have friends who can help me.

The word 'kids' is incorrect here; it should be 'keys' to match the context. Also, 'friends can help me' needs the relative pronoun 'who' to be grammatically correct.

× I usually use a different support to remember thing.

✓ I usually use different supports to remember things.

The singular 'support' should be plural 'supports' to indicate multiple methods. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the general sense of multiple items to remember.