Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and repetition such as 'I I'. Also, make your answer more concise and structured by directly stating your strengths and weaknesses in memorising, and provide a clear example.

例: Yes, I am good at memorising interesting facts, especially historical ones. However, I find it difficult to remember numbers or people's faces.

提案: Avoid repeating 'once' and improve sentence fluency. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, and correct grammar mistakes such as 'forgot forgave'.

例: Yes, I once forgot my mom's birthday, which was very embarrassing. Fortunately, she forgave me.

提案: Make your answer clearer and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain why these things are important. Avoid incomplete sentences and awkward phrasing.

例: Firstly, I need to remember tasks related to my job because they are important. My boss relies on me to complete my duties and responsibilities on time.

提案: Avoid repetition of 'really' and 'Notes app'. Combine sentences for better flow and use linking words to explain how the app helps you.

例: I usually use the Notes app on my iPhone to remember important meetings and deadlines because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything.

× Yes, I have once.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten once.

The original sentence lacks the main verb 'forgotten' needed to complete the present perfect tense. 'Have' must be followed by the past participle form of the verb to indicate an action that happened at an unspecified time before now.

× I remember once I forgot about my mom's birthday.

✓ I remember once forgetting my mom's birthday.

The verb 'remember' when followed by an action that happened in the past should be followed by the gerund form ('forgetting') to indicate recalling a past event.

× but happily my mom forgot forgave me.

✓ but happily my mom forgave me.

The phrase 'forgot forgave' is incorrect; only one past tense verb is needed here. 'Forgave' is the correct past tense of 'forgive' to express that the mom pardoned the speaker.

× I have a duties and responsibilities that my boss relies me on so.

✓ I have duties and responsibilities that my boss relies on me for.

The article 'a' should not be used before plural nouns 'duties and responsibilities'. Also, the preposition 'on' should be followed by 'me' and the phrase reordered for clarity.

× that my boss relies me on so.

✓ that my boss relies on me.

The verb 'rely' is followed by the preposition 'on', so the correct phrase is 'relies on me'. The word 'so' at the end is unnecessary and should be removed.

× I just write it down to my Notes app.

✓ I just write it down in my Notes app.

The correct preposition to use with 'write down' and an app is 'in', not 'to'. 'Write down in my Notes app' is the proper phrase.