Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了记忆方法，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“more better”应为“better”，“enhance”缺少主语。建议简化句子结构，注意语法准确性，并使用更自然的表达。

例: Yes, I'm good at memorizing things. I usually set reminders, use memorizing apps, and write notes on sticky pads to help me remember important information. These methods are convenient and improve my memory.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“to by writing down”不正确。建议使用更准确的句子结构，表达情感时可以更自然，避免重复。

例: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which was very frustrating. I apologized to her and now I make sure to write down important dates or set reminders so I don't forget again.

提案: 回答内容较笼统，表达不够连贯，且“figures”用词不当。建议具体说明需要记住的事项，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important appointments, birthdays, work schedules, and academic tasks. These include dates, events, and important information related to my studies and job.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“with two remember things”和“It's come”不合适。建议简化句子，注意时态和搭配，表达更自然。

例: I usually remember important things by using calendar apps on my smartphone and writing notes in notebooks. I also set notifications and make to-do lists, combining both online and offline methods.

× I often use effective memorizing methods such as set reminders, use memorizing apps, and often write down on the sticky new notes to remember things more better.

✓ I often use effective memorizing methods such as setting reminders, using memorizing apps, and often writing down on sticky notes to remember things better.

这里的错误是名词复数和动词形式不匹配。'set reminders' 应改为 'setting reminders'，'use memorizing apps' 应改为 'using memorizing apps'，'write down on the sticky new notes' 中 'the sticky new notes' 应改为复数形式 'sticky notes'，且 'more better' 是错误的比较级，应该用 'better'。建议使用动名词形式保持句子结构一致。

× I often use effective memorizing methods such as set reminders, use memorizing apps, and often write down on the sticky new notes to remember things more better.

✓ I often use effective memorizing methods such as setting reminders, using memorizing apps, and often writing down on sticky notes to remember things better.

'more better' 是错误的比较级表达，'better' 已经是比较级，不能加 'more'。应直接使用 'better'。

× It's convenient and enhance my remembering.

✓ It's convenient and enhances my remembering.

主语 'It' 是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'enhances'。

× Yes, I have forgotten something important once I forgot my best friend's birthday.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important; once, I forgot my best friend's birthday.

句子中 'once' 用来引导过去发生的具体事件，前半句用现在完成时，后半句用一般过去时，建议用分号或句号分开，保持时态一致。

× I apologize for her and I think it's important for me to remember things to by writing down or set reminders when it can.

✓ I apologize to her and I think it's important for me to remember things by writing them down or setting reminders when I can.

'apologize' 后应接介词 'to' 而非 'for'。'to by writing down' 结构错误，应为 'by writing them down'。'set reminders' 应改为动名词形式 'setting reminders'。'when it can' 应改为 'when I can'。

× In my daily life I need to remember some important appointment dates and also birthday dates, something related to work schedule or academic task.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember some important appointment dates and also birthday dates, something related to work schedules or academic tasks.

'work schedule' 和 'academic task' 应使用复数形式以匹配前文的复数名词 'dates'。

× I often remember important things by setting calendar apps in my smart phone, writing down all sticky notes on notebooks.

✓ I often remember important things by setting calendar apps on my smartphone and writing down all sticky notes in notebooks.

'setting calendar apps in my smart phone' 中应使用介词 'on' 而非 'in'。'writing down all sticky notes on notebooks' 应改为 'in notebooks'，因为笔记本是容器。

× Also I set notifications and making to do lists.

✓ Also, I set notifications and make to-do lists.

'set' 和 'make' 应保持并列结构，不能一个用动词原形一个用动名词。应统一使用动词原形。

× I combine both the online and offline with two remember things.

✓ I combine both online and offline methods to remember things.

句子结构混乱，'with two remember things' 不通顺，应改为 'methods to remember things'，使句子完整且通顺。

× It's come.

✓ That's how I do it.

'It's come' 句子不完整且无意义，应改为完整表达，如 'That's how I do it.' 来总结前文。