Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议练习用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并用连接词组织句子，使表达更自然流畅。

例: I find memorising things quite challenging, especially when it comes to learning Chinese. However, I can remember important events in my life more easily.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议用完整句子直接回答问题，并具体说明忘记了什么重要的事情。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once missed an important exam because I forgot the date.

提案: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，缺乏具体细节。建议明确说明日常生活中需要记住的具体事项，并用完整句子表达。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important appointments and deadlines to stay organized.

提案: 表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用简单句说明你如何通过记笔记来帮助记忆，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I usually write important information in my notes. This helps me remember details and check them whenever necessary.

× Actually. It is hard to say you know, because when I starting having it very hard to remember something is specially the Chinese is specially something I needed to. Repaired. Better for other things that it specially the things happened in the lives I can remember it.

✓ Actually, it is hard to say, you know, because when I start having it very hard to remember something, especially Chinese, which is something I need to improve. For other things, especially the things that happened in life, I can remember them.

句中“starting”应使用动词原形“start”与助动词“when I”搭配，表示动作的开始。句子结构混乱，需调整语序和用词，使表达更清晰。

× Actually. It is hard to say you know, because when I starting having it very hard to remember something is specially the Chinese is specially something I needed to. Repaired. Better for other things that it specially the things happened in the lives I can remember it.

✓ Actually, it is hard to say, you know, because when I start having it very hard to remember something, especially Chinese, which is something I need to improve. For other things, especially the things that happened in life, I can remember them.

句中“specially”用法不当，应使用“especially”表示“尤其”。

× Yeah, I think it. There is no easy to everybody to remember everything. Uh. I forgot a very important test before that I missed the test it.

✓ Yeah, I think it's not easy for everybody to remember everything. Uh, I forgot a very important test before; I missed the test.

句中“missed the test it”多余“it”，且句子结构不完整，需调整为完整的过去时态句子。

× Yeah, I think it. There is no easy to everybody to remember everything. Uh. I forgot a very important test before that I missed the test it.

✓ Yeah, I think it's not easy for everybody to remember everything. Uh, I forgot a very important test before; I missed the test.

“easy to everybody”应改为“easy for everybody”，介词使用错误。

× I think some very important moment. Which can. Record. I was self is very. Worst to remember.

✓ I think some very important moments can be recorded. I myself find it very hard to remember.

原句断句不当，缺少谓语，句子结构混乱，需调整为完整句子。

× I think some very important moment. Which can. Record. I was self is very. Worst to remember.

✓ I think some very important moments can be recorded. I myself find it very hard to remember.

“I was self”应为“I myself”，代词使用错误。

× You are there. I overwrite aids into notes. Which can hear me to remember it every time when I want to check some important things that I can check it and it also helped me to remember all the details and the time.

✓ I write aids into notes, which help me remember them every time I want to check some important things. I can check them, and it also helps me remember all the details and the time.

“You are there”无意义，应删除。句中“hear me”应为“help me”，代词和动词使用错误。

× You are there. I overwrite aids into notes. Which can hear me to remember it every time when I want to check some important things that I can check it and it also helped me to remember all the details and the time.

✓ I write aids into notes, which help me remember them every time I want to check some important things. I can check them, and it also helps me remember all the details and the time.

“overwrite aids into notes”表达不当，应为“write aids into notes”，介词使用错误。