Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần mạch lạc hơn và tránh ngắt quãng không cần thiết. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I think I am quite good at memorising things, especially in the short term. However, I sometimes forget details quickly if I don't review them regularly.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời tránh ngắt quãng không cần thiết. Hãy thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và chi tiết hơn.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once I forgot my girlfriend's birthday, which made her upset for a few days. Besides that, I sometimes forget my schedules if I don't write them down.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và chia động từ cho đúng.

例: Well, I think remembering my daily schedules is very important. Therefore, I usually make a list of tasks to do each day or week so that I don't forget anything.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngắt quãng, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý tưởng logic, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: I use a specific notebook and a folder on my computer to store important information that I need to remember for a long time, such as my girlfriend's birthday, exam dates, and my personal goals.

× Well, in terms of short term memories, I believe I've. A natural talent of remember things very quickly.

✓ Well, in terms of short term memories, I believe I've a natural talent for remembering things very quickly.

The phrase 'a natural talent of remember' is incorrect. The correct form is 'a natural talent for remembering' because 'talent' is followed by 'for' and the gerund form of the verb (verb + -ing).

× Well, in terms of short term memories, I believe I've. A natural talent of remember things very quickly.

✓ Well, in terms of short term memory, I believe I've a natural talent for remembering things very quickly.

The phrase 'short term memories' should be 'short term memory' because 'memory' in this context is an uncountable noun referring to the ability to remember, not individual memories.

× Well, in terms of short term memories, I believe I've. A natural talent of remember things very quickly.

✓ Well, in terms of short term memory, I believe I've a natural talent for remembering things very quickly.

The original sentence is fragmented with a period after 'I've' which breaks the sentence incorrectly. It should be one continuous sentence for clarity and correctness.

× But On the contrary. I also forgot things much faster than other.

✓ But on the contrary, I also forget things much faster than others.

'On the contrary' should not be a separate sentence and should be followed by a comma. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context, and 'other' should be 'others' to refer to other people.

× But On the contrary. I also forgot things much faster than other.

✓ But on the contrary, I also forget things much faster than others.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the context suggests a general truth, so present tense 'forget' is appropriate.

× I remember there was a time when I forgot my girlfriend birthday Anne.

✓ I remember there was a time when I forgot my girlfriend's birthday, Anne.

The possessive form 'girlfriend's' is needed to show ownership of the birthday. Also, a comma is needed before the name 'Anne' as an appositive.

× She angry at me and didn't talk to me for like two or three days.

✓ She was angry at me and didn't talk to me for like two or three days.

The verb 'was' is missing before 'angry' to form the correct past tense sentence.

× Apart from that, I also sometimes. Forget my schedules.

✓ Apart from that, I also sometimes forget my schedules.

The period after 'sometimes' incorrectly breaks the sentence. It should be one sentence with 'sometimes' before the verb 'forget'.

× Well, personally speaking, I think my schedules is the most important thing that I have to remember.

✓ Well, personally speaking, I think my schedule is the most important thing that I have to remember.

'Schedules' is plural but 'is' is singular. To match the singular verb 'is', 'schedule' should be singular.

× Therefore I. Usually make a list of things that I have to do in a day or sometimes a week.

✓ Therefore, I usually make a list of things that I have to do in a day or sometimes a week.

The period after 'I' incorrectly breaks the sentence. Also, a comma after 'Therefore' improves sentence flow.

× Therefore I wouldn't forget it and more.

✓ Therefore, I wouldn't forget it and more.

A comma after 'Therefore' is needed for correct sentence structure and flow.

× I have a specific notebook and a folder in my computer that consists of all the important information that I need to remember for a long time, such as my girlfriend, birthday, my examination date and my goal and my. And other things in chin.

✓ I have a specific notebook and a folder on my computer that contain all the important information I need to remember for a long time, such as my girlfriend's birthday, my examination date, my goals, and other things in China.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'in my computer' should be 'on my computer'; 'consists' should be 'contain' to agree with plural subject; 'girlfriend, birthday' should be 'girlfriend's birthday'; 'my goal and my. And other things in chin.' is fragmented and unclear, corrected to 'my goals, and other things in China.' for clarity and correctness.