Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强句子结构的准确性和逻辑性，避免重复和冗余。可以用更自然的表达方式来描述记忆力不好的情况，并举具体例子。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, when I go shopping without a list, I often forget what I need to buy.

提案: 回答内容混乱且难以理解，缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议练习用简单明了的句子表达经历，确保语法正确，内容具体且相关。

例: Yes, I once forgot to bring an important document to school, which made my teacher upset.

提案: 回答中有很多词汇和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用简单准确的词汇，直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明需要记住的事情。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important rules, like waiting for the green light before crossing the street to stay safe.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用正确的句子结构，清楚地说明记忆方法，并举例说明如何使用手机帮助记忆。

例: I usually remember important things by taking notes on my mobile phone. This way, I can easily check and update them whenever I need.

× No, I'm not good at it and sometimes I will forget important the sense.

✓ No, I'm not good at it and sometimes I will forget important things.

这里的'sense'用法不当，应该用复数形式'things'表示多件重要的事情。

× For example, if I consulting I will forget what I need to buy if I don't take notes.

✓ For example, if I am consulting, I will forget what I need to buy if I don't take notes.

动词'consulting'前缺少助动词'am'，表示现在进行时态。

× Yes, I use the two. Forgot some important sense focusing on board.

✓ Yes, I used to forget some important things focusing on the board.

这里需要使用过去时态'used to'表示过去经常发生的事情，'Forgot'应改为过去式'forget'的正确形式，且'sense'应为复数'things'。

× Pass the summer holiday I have dyed my real best friends posted that having him annoyed.

✓ During the summer holiday, I annoyed my real best friends by posting that, which made him upset.

原句结构混乱，时态和词汇使用错误。'Pass'应为'during'，'have dyed'应为'has annoyed'或简单过去时，'posted that having him annoyed'表达不清，改为更通顺的表达。

× I need to remember law services.

✓ I need to remember laws and services.

'law services'表达不清，可能想表达'法律和服务'，需要复数形式。

× As a college student, it is very important to remember to play light of the crosswalk.

✓ As a college student, it is very important to remember to obey the traffic light at the crosswalk.

'play light'用法错误，应为'obey the traffic light'表示遵守交通信号灯。

× If you don't announcer first walk in time you will get low suckers.

✓ If you don't cross the street in time, you will get a traffic ticket.

'announcer first walk'表达错误，应该是'cross the street'，'low suckers'应为'traffic ticket'或罚单。

× I remember important things by taking those.

✓ I remember important things by taking notes.

'taking those'用法错误，应为'taking notes'表示记笔记。

× I use my mobile phone to take those in is very common and to read on those in digital and it is easy to change.

✓ I use my mobile phone to take notes; it is very common to read notes digitally, and it is easy to edit them.

'take those'应为'take notes'，句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。