Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear and concise response with a topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often practise repeating information to myself, which helps me remember it clearly.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and provide a clear reason or example to support your answer.

例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always make sure to write down important tasks and review them regularly.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not directly answer the question. Try to clearly state what you need to remember daily and explain why, using simple and correct sentences.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my appointments and tasks to stay organised and complete everything on time.

提案: Your answer is too brief and unclear. Provide a clear method or strategy you use to remember important things, and explain it with supporting details.

例: I remember important things by making lists and setting reminders on my phone, which helps me stay focused and not forget anything.

× Yes, hi. How good at memorizing thoughts in my thoughts because I thought that's really clearly.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorizing things because I think clearly.

The original sentence has sentence structure errors and unclear phrasing. 'How good at memorizing thoughts in my thoughts' is not a correct English phrase. The correction uses a proper subject-verb structure and clearer expression. This relates to Grammar Problem Type ID 26: Sentence structure errors.

× No, I didn't forget to something important because I always have memorized my important things that properly then.

✓ No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I always memorize my important things properly.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'didn't forget to something' which is ungrammatical. Also, 'have memorized' is awkward here. The correction uses present perfect 'haven't forgotten' to indicate experience up to now and simple present 'memorize' for habitual action. This relates to Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue.

× I didn't need any remembering my a daily life because it's a follow up or in the basis of daily because I want to be clearly done in my name life.

✓ I don't need to remember anything in my daily life because I follow a routine and want to complete my daily tasks clearly.

The original sentence misuses quantifiers and articles ('any remembering my a daily life') and has unclear phrasing. The correction uses 'anything' correctly and clarifies the meaning. This relates to Grammar Problem Type ID 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers.

× I have a clear vision or a remembering what I want to do.

✓ I have a clear vision and remember what I want to do.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'a remembering' which is ungrammatical. The correction uses proper noun and verb forms to express the idea clearly. This relates to Grammar Problem Type ID 26: Sentence structure errors.