Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在较多错误，且内容重复，缺乏清晰的主题句和具体细节。建议加强语法基础，避免重复表达，并尝试用简洁的句子直接回答问题。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget what I did yesterday or the day before. This sometimes causes problems in my work and studies, so I try to improve my memory.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，内容缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议学习正确的时态和句型，使用连接词使回答更连贯，并举具体例子说明。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot to bring the materials my friends asked me to take, and I also missed some classes. These mistakes caused me some trouble.

提案: 回答内容混乱，语法和词汇使用错误较多，缺乏逻辑和具体细节。建议先理清思路，使用简单句表达清楚自己需要记住的具体事项。

例: As a university student, I need to remember important knowledge from my classes and also keep track of my workout schedule to stay healthy.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法错误多，逻辑不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，说明具体方法，并使用连接词使回答连贯。

例: I remember important things by asking my best friend to remind me. Also, I write notes in my notebook to help me remember tasks I need to do.

× Actually I don't get as memory thing things.

✓ Actually I don't have a good memory.

这里's memory thing things'是错误的复数和表达方式，应该用不可数名词'memory'表示记忆力。

× I always forget about a lot of things I data such as yesterday or the day before yesterday.

✓ I always forget a lot of things, like what I did yesterday or the day before yesterday.

'forget about'后面不需要加'a lot of things I data'，且'data'用法错误，应改为描述具体内容。

× So I think this is a problem for my filing an working.

✓ So I think this is a problem for my filing and working.

'filing an working'中'an'应为'and'，连接两个名词。

× Of course I always forgotten.

✓ Of course I always forget.

'always forgotten'时态错误，'always'应与一般现在时连用，表示经常发生的动作。

× I always forgot to something important, such as I forgot about drawing the extremes and I forgot to take something my friends told me to take.

✓ I always forget something important, such as forgetting to do the exercises and forgetting to take something my friends told me to take.

'forgot'应改为一般现在时'forget'，且表达更自然。

× And I also forgot to go winter school, go to school.

✓ And I also forgot to go to winter school, to go to school.

动词'go'后面需要加介词'to'表示去某地。

× I need to remember not have things such as because now I am student in university so I have to remember not all for knowledge E in my calls and I have to remember how to workout.

✓ I need to remember many things because now I am a student at university, so I have to remember all the knowledge in my classes and I have to remember how to work out.

表达不清且缺少冠词，'not have things'应改为'many things'，'student'前加冠词'a'，'in university'改为'at university'，'calls'应为'classes'，'workout'应分开为'work out'。

× Oh no, not all 4th answer.

✓ Oh no, not all for that answer.

'4th'应为'for that'，表达意思为'不是全部针对那个答案'。

× I can. I have I can remember important things such as you can tell your best friend to preference to remind you when you have to do something and you also can they take notes on for more on your notebook to remind you to do something important and also you can do it.

✓ I can remember important things. For example, you can tell your best friend to remind you when you have to do something, and you can also take notes in your notebook to remind you to do important things.

句子结构混乱，代词使用错误，'preference'用错，应为'remind'，'they take notes on for more'表达错误，应简化为'take notes in your notebook'。