Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but lacks fluency and contains grammatical errors. Try to form a complete sentence and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer more natural and coherent.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I have been practising this skill since my childhood, especially for my studies.

提案: Your answer is too long and contains fillers like 'uh'. Try to be more concise and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to support your answer.

例: Unfortunately, yes. I often forget important things, which has affected my studies. For example, even though I studied well before exams, I sometimes struggled to recall information during the test.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and filler words. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be more specific about the details you remember.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to pack my bag carefully so that I don't forget important items. Additionally, at work, I make sure to remember all the details discussed in meetings to improve my performance.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Provide specific methods you use to remember things.

例: I remember important things by following a daily routine. Because I repeat tasks regularly, they become habits, so I don't struggle to complete them.

× Memorizing things Yes I am pretty good at memorizing things as I have been practicing it since childhood for a studies.

✓ Memorizing things. Yes, I am pretty good at memorizing things as I have been practicing it since childhood for my studies.

The phrase 'for a studies' is incorrect because 'studies' is plural and requires the possessive pronoun 'my' instead of the article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'for my studies'. Also, a period and comma are needed for clarity.

× this is very common thing that I have felt that I forget uh, things very easily and which affected my studies a lot

✓ this is a very common thing that I have felt that I forget, uh, things very easily and which affected my studies a lot

The phrase 'very common thing' requires the article 'a' before the singular noun 'thing'. Without 'a', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× on the exam day, uh, I had a lot of problem remembering the same thing again.

✓ on the exam day, uh, I had a lot of problems remembering the same thing again.

The phrase 'a lot of problem' is incorrect because 'problem' should be plural here. The correct phrase is 'a lot of problems'.

× the things that I used to remember our, uh, packing my bag so that I don't forget the most important things that I needed.

✓ the things that I used to remember are, uh, packing my bag so that I don't forget the most important things that I need.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrect here; it should be 'are' to link the subject and predicate. Also, 'needed' should be 'need' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I also need to remember every single detail that's been set in the meetings so that I can improve and do better.

✓ I also need to remember every single detail that's been set during the meetings so that I can improve and do better.

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate here; 'during' better expresses the time when the details are set.

× Since there's a repetition in my daily life routine, so it has been built in my head that I have to do certain things in a certain way so that, uh.

✓ Since there's a repetition in my daily life routine, it has been built in my head that I have to do certain things in a certain way so that, uh,

Using both 'Since' and 'so' together is redundant. The conjunction 'so' should be removed to correct the sentence structure.

× When I'm essentially doing the task, I don't have to struggle to do it.

✓ When I'm essentially doing the task, I don't have to struggle to do it.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.