Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點不自然，語法和用詞需要改進。建議你直接回答問題，並用完整句子表達，避免使用口語詞如 "Dang"，並且注意語法正確，例如 "I can memorize my friends' phone numbers."

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can remember my friends' phone numbers without writing them down, and I can also recall my daily schedule easily.

提案: 你的回答不夠清楚且語法錯誤較多，建議你用完整且連貫的句子回答，並且清楚說明忘記重要事情的原因。避免使用不明確的詞彙，如 "boundary" 和 "J Leg"。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, last week I forgot to meet my friends because I just returned from Germany and was very tired, so I couldn't manage my time well.

提案: 你的回答有基本結構，但語句不夠流暢且有語法錯誤。建議你使用連接詞使句子更連貫，並注意時間表達的正確性，例如 "8:00 AM to 4:00 PM"。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my university class schedule because it changes frequently. Unlike in elementary or high school, classes are not at the same time every day. Also, I have to remember meetings with my club members.

提案: 你的回答不夠清楚且有語法錯誤，建議你用更簡潔且正確的句子說明如何記住重要事情，並避免使用不明確的詞彙如 "quadding promoted"。

例: If I have an important event, I type it into my phone's calendar and set an alarm. For example, my phone will remind me 30 minutes before the event so I don't forget.

× I'm good, I did.

✓ I'm good at it.

The original sentence uses 'I did' incorrectly to express ability. The correct way is to say 'I'm good at it' to indicate skill or ability in the present tense.

× I can memorize my friends cell phones number and sometimes I don't need to write.

✓ I can memorize my friends' cell phone numbers and sometimes I don't need to write them down.

The sentence has singular/plural errors: 'friends' should be possessive plural 'friends'', 'cell phones number' should be plural 'cell phone numbers', and 'write' should be 'write them down' to clarify the object.

× Dang, my schedule and I can still memorize it.

✓ Dang, I can still memorize my schedule.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear subject-object relationship. The corrected sentence clarifies that the speaker can memorize their schedule.

× Yeah. Last week I.

✓ Yeah, last week I forgot something important.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. The correction completes the sentence to make it meaningful.

× I had to go boundary with my plan with my friends but I forgot it because I just came back from Germany and I need to take a rest and I and then there is some. J Leg.

✓ I had to go on a trip with my friends, but I forgot about it because I had just come back from Germany and needed to rest. Also, I had some jet lag.

The phrase 'go boundary with my plan' is incorrect; 'go on a trip' is appropriate. 'Forgot it' should be 'forgot about it'. 'Need to take a rest' should be 'needed to rest' for past tense consistency. 'J Leg' is corrected to 'jet lag'.

× So I cannot manage my time well.

✓ So I could not manage my time well.

Since the context is past tense, 'cannot' should be 'could not' to maintain tense consistency.

× First of all, I need to remember my class schedule in university or a class schedule change all the time.

✓ First of all, I need to remember my class schedule at university because the class schedule changes all the time.

The article 'a' before 'class schedule change' is incorrect; it should be 'the class schedule changes' to indicate a specific schedule and correct verb agreement.

× It is not like elementary school or high school.

✓ It is not like elementary or high school.

The phrase 'elementary school or high school' is acceptable, but 'elementary or high school' is more natural and concise.

× You just go to the classroom A2 from 8:00 PM to 4:00 PM, from 8:00 AM to 4:00 PM everyday.

✓ You just go to classroom A2 from 8:00 AM to 4:00 PM every day.

The time '8:00 PM to 4:00 PM' is incorrect; it should be '8:00 AM to 4:00 PM'. Also, 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). The article 'the' before 'classroom A2' is unnecessary.

× An next I have to remember some meeting with my club member.

✓ And next, I have to remember some meetings with my club members.

'An' should be 'And'. 'Meeting' should be plural 'meetings' and 'club member' should be plural 'club members' to match the context.

× If it is quadding promoted, I will.

✓ If it is a scheduled appointment, I will.

The phrase 'quadding promoted' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. Assuming the intended meaning is 'scheduled appointment' or 'important event'.

× Type in my calendar on my cell phone and I will set alarm in this way before.

✓ I type it into my calendar on my cell phone and set an alarm beforehand.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× Of 530 minutes before the event my.

✓ About 30 minutes before the event, my

'Of 530 minutes' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended '30 minutes'. The phrase is incomplete and needs to be connected properly.

× My phone will send me a message and it will remind me that I need to go somewhere else.

✓ My phone will send me a message to remind me that I need to go somewhere.

The original sentence is understandable but can be more concise and natural by combining the clauses.