Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“forgave”应为“forget”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词时态和拼写，避免重复表达，同时句子应更简洁流畅。

例: No, I am not very good at memorising things. I often forget important dates or details, so I rely on reminders or notes to help me remember. For example, I use my phone's calendar app to keep track of important events.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“at that I I was being I was binge watching”表达混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用连贯的连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, last week I was supposed to meet my friend, but I completely forgot because I was binge-watching a TV series called The Desperate Housewives. I lost track of time, which made me feel bad and upset my friend.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“majored”应为“major”，“jet line”可能是“deadline”，且句子不够连贯。建议加强词汇准确性和句子逻辑性，使用连接词使表达更清晰。

例: There are many things I need to remember daily. First, I have to recall professional knowledge, such as mathematical formulas, which are essential for my major. Besides that, I also keep track of important details like appointments or deadlines to stay organized and avoid missing anything important.

提案: 回答中语句不完整且有拼写错误，如“Roy”应为“way”，“film”应为“phone”，“nodes”应为“notes”。建议注意发音和拼写，使用完整句子并合理连接，使表达更自然。

例: The main way I remember important things is by using technology like my phone. I set reminders or use calendar apps, and at the same time, I also use notes or a to-do list to help me remember tasks.

× I often forgave important dates or details so I really relying on reminders or notes to help me to remember.

✓ I often forget important dates or details so I really rely on reminders or notes to help me remember.

这里使用了过去式"forgave"，但句子表达的是经常发生的事情，应该用一般现在时"forget"。另外，"relying"应改为动词原形"rely"，因为前面有助动词"do"的省略。

× For example, I use my phones calendar app to keep track of the important.

✓ For example, I use my phone's calendar app to keep track of the important things.

"phones"应为所有格形式"phone's"，表示手机的日历应用。句末缺少名词，补充"things"使句子完整。

× Yes, last week I was supposed to meet my friend but I completely forgot about it because at that I I was being I was binge watching a TV series called the Desperate Housewives.

✓ Yes, last week I was supposed to meet my friend but I completely forgot about it because at that time I was binge watching a TV series called The Desperate Housewives.

"at that I I was being"语法错误，应为"at that time I was"。"being"不适合此处，去掉即可。

× So I lose track of time.

✓ So I lost track of time.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式"lost"。

× And it makes me feel bad and make my friend feel angry.

✓ And it made me feel bad and made my friend feel angry.

描述过去的感受，动词应使用过去式"made"。

× Well there are many thing I need to remember in my daily life.

✓ Well there are many things I need to remember in my daily life.

"thing"应为复数形式"things"，因为前面有"many"修饰。

× First of all I need to remember professional knowledge like mathematical formulas which are essential for my majored.

✓ First of all I need to remember professional knowledge like mathematical formulas which are essential for my major.

"majored"是动词过去式，句中应使用名词"major"表示专业。

× And besides that I also need to keep track of important details like appointments or jet line so that I can stay organized and a medium avoid missing anything important.

✓ And besides that I also need to keep track of important details like appointments or jet lag so that I can stay organized and avoid missing anything important.

"jet line"应为"jet lag"，表示时差。"a medium avoid"语法错误，应去掉"a medium"。

× The first that Roy is that the. Technology like my film to help meet.

✓ The first thing is technology like my phone to help me.

句子结构混乱，"The first that Roy is that the."无意义，改为"The first thing is"。"film"应为"phone"，"help meet"应为"help me"。

× I can set a reminder or use my calendar apps and and at the same time I also use nodes or To Do List to help me remember something.

✓ I can set a reminder or use my calendar app and at the same time I also use notes or a To-Do List to help me remember something.

"calendar apps"应为单数"calendar app"，因为前面有不定冠词"a"。"nodes"应为"notes"。"To Do List"前应加冠词"a"。