Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的に不完全です。質問に直接答え、明確な主題文を使い、具体的な詳細を付け加える練習をしましょう。例えば、記憶力の良さについて具体的な例を述べると良いです。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I often remember conversations with my friends, which sometimes surprises them because I recall details they forgot.

提案: 回答が断片的で不完全です。質問に対して直接的かつ完全な文で答え、具体的な例を明確に述べることが必要です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、流れを良くしましょう。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once missed an appointment with a client because I forgot the date, which taught me to be more careful.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。質問に対して明確に答え、具体的な内容を整理して述べる練習をしましょう。不要な言葉は避け、論理的に話を展開してください。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember many things because I work as a clinical research associate. For example, I have to keep track of my tasks, important phone numbers, and appointments.

提案: 文法的な誤りと不自然な表現があります。質問に対して直接答え、具体的な方法を明確に説明し、接続詞を使って文をつなげる練習をしましょう。

例: I usually make lists to remember important things. For example, I write a shopping list before going to the store, and I also keep a task list at work to stay organized.

× If I do, I always memorize what my friend said. So some of my friends. Very surprised at it.

✓ If I do, I always memorize what my friend said, so some of my friends are very surprised at it.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions and verbs to connect ideas. Combining the sentences with a comma and 'so' creates a complete sentence. Also, 'are' is needed for the present tense plural subject 'friends'.

× Yes, I did. I had forgotten something important before, for example. I forgot to. I forgot my appointment with my client. And.

✓ Yes, I did. I had forgotten something important before, for example, I forgot my appointment with my client.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. 'I forgot to.' is incomplete and 'And.' is a fragment. Combining the ideas into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I have to remember many things in my daily life because I work at a clinical research associate who manages the process of drug development. And in my dog there there are so many things to remember such as my tasks or digits, marriage and so on.

✓ I have to remember many things in my daily life because I work as a clinical research associate who manages the process of drug development. Also, in my job, there are many things to remember such as my tasks, deadlines, meetings, and so on.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition 'at' instead of 'as' and contains repeated words 'there there'. 'In my dog' is a typo for 'in my job'. 'Digits' and 'marriage' are likely incorrect words in this context; 'deadlines' and 'meetings' are more appropriate. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× I sometimes made of task raised to remember the important things.

✓ I sometimes make a to-do list to remember important things.

The original sentence uses incorrect verb forms and phrases. 'Made of task raised' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'make a to-do list' or 'make a list'. The verb 'make' should be in present tense to match 'sometimes'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× For example, I make a list when I go shopping or. During my work. Making creates helps me to remember things well.

✓ For example, I make a list when I go shopping or during my work. Making lists helps me remember things well.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain incorrect phrases like 'Making creates'. Combining the fragments and correcting the phrase to 'Making lists' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.