Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“forget”应为“forgot”，“fighting some people”表达不清且不合适。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，避免口语填充词如“you know”，并简洁表达。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, last Friday I forgot to take my keys with me, so I had to ask someone to help me open the door.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“forgot”应为“forgotten”，句子结构混乱，表达不清。建议使用完整句子，避免重复和口语填充词，清晰描述事件。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, when I started college, I missed the time of an important entrance exam, but fortunately, there was a second chance to take it.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“Sing some working”不明确，且句子不连贯。建议用清晰的句子表达日常需要记住的事情，避免口语填充词，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: In my daily life, I mainly need to remember my work schedule and tasks for the morning and afternoon. Other than that, I try not to worry too much about other things.

提案: 回答表达不够连贯，存在语法错误和口语填充词。建议使用完整句子，清晰说明记忆方法，并用连接词使表达更自然。

例: Since I have a poor memory, I always write important things down in my To-Do List. This helps me remember tasks and deadlines effectively.

× For example, last Friday I forget to take my key out with me.

✓ For example, last Friday I forgot to take my key out with me.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式。forget的过去式是forgot。

× So I spent a lot of time fighting some people to help me open my door.

✓ So I spent a lot of time asking some people to help me open my door.

原句中使用了fighting（争吵），但语境应为请求帮助，应该用ask而不是fight。

× Is bad saying.

✓ It's a bad saying.

句子缺少主语和谓语，应补充完整。

× Yeah, I've always forgot a lot of things, but if I have to say 1.

✓ Yeah, I've always forgotten a lot of things, but if I have to say one.

这里用的是现在完成时，forget的过去分词是forgotten，不能用过去式forgot。

× That is most seriously, I think you know, when I enter the college, I have one very important entrance examination and I forgot the time, but luckily they have, you know, the second time to prepare for.

✓ That is the most serious. I think, you know, when I entered college, I had a very important entrance examination and I forgot the time, but luckily they gave me a second chance to prepare.

1. 形容词最高级前应加定冠词the。2. 过去时间点应使用过去式entered和had。3. 表示机会应用a second chance而非the second time。

× Sing some working.

✓ Some work.

这里应使用名词work而非动名词working。

× I just have to know what I have to finish in the afternoon, in the morning.

✓ I just have to know what I have to finish in the morning and in the afternoon.

时间顺序应为早上和下午，且连接词and更合适。

× And then everything, I just let it be, let it go.

✓ And then for everything else, I just let it be, let it go.

需要加上for everything else使句子更完整，表达更清晰。

× Well actually as I mentioned before, I don't have a good memory so I always write them down Oh my To Do List.

✓ Well actually, as I mentioned before, I don't have a good memory so I always write them down on my To Do List.

缺少介词on，表示写在清单上。

× To kind of remind me of some, you know? Importance of the things.

✓ To kind of remind me of the importance of things.

这里importance前应加定冠词the，且things前不需要the。

× That is a really good way.

✓ That is a really good way to do that.

句子不完整，需补充说明是“做这件事的好方法”。

× So for some people who has bad memories.

✓ So for some people who have bad memories.

people是复数，谓语动词应使用have。