Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'earth photographic memory' nên là 'a photographic memory', và 'witch' có thể là lỗi đánh máy của 'which'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp, đồng thời câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I think I have a photographic memory, which helps me remember things easily. For instance, I can quickly recall my friends' names and important details about them without much effort. This ability is very helpful when I study.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'her photographic memory' nên là 'a photographic memory', và câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

例: I rarely forget important things because I have a photographic memory. However, to be sure, I usually rely on technical apps like reminders on my phone to help me remember important tasks.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'kruzer appointments' và 'taesan' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác, câu trả lời rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important appointments and deadlines to stay organized. For example, I often use a planner to keep track of my tasks, which helps me avoid forgetting anything crucial. This method helps me manage my time better and reduce stress.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'ride on 2 lists' và 'totalist acts' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I use several methods to remember important things, such as writing lists and relying on technical apps like calendars or to-do list applications.

× I believe I have earth photographic memory which means I can easily memorize things.

✓ I believe I have a photographic memory which means I can easily memorize things.

The phrase 'earth photographic memory' is incorrect; it should be 'a photographic memory' to correctly use the singular noun with an article.

× I can quickly recall my friends names and important details about the witch without much efford.

✓ I can quickly recall my friends' names and important details about the witch without much effort.

The plural possessive form 'friends' names' requires an apostrophe after 'friends' to indicate possession. Also, 'efford' is a misspelling of 'effort'.

× This ability have me a lot when I study.

✓ This ability helps me a lot when I study.

The subject 'ability' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' instead of 'have'. Also, 'have me a lot' is incorrect; 'helps me a lot' is the correct expression.

× So is it very hard for me to forgot, forget something important?

✓ So is it very hard for me to forget something important?

The verb 'forgot' is past tense and incorrect here; the base form 'forget' should be used after 'to' (infinitive form).

× Because I usually relying on technical apps to remind.

✓ Because I usually rely on technical apps to remind me.

After 'usually', the base form of the verb 'rely' should be used, not the '-ing' form 'relying'. Also, 'to remind' needs an object, so 'me' is added.

× I have to remember kruzer appointments like an deadlines to stay organized.

✓ I have to remember crucial appointments like deadlines to stay organized.

'Kruzer' is likely a misspelling of 'crucial'. Also, 'an deadlines' is incorrect; 'deadlines' is plural and does not need 'an'.

× I often use a planner to keep track of my taesan, avoid forget things anything crucial.

✓ I often use a planner to keep track of my tasks and avoid forgetting anything crucial.

'Taesan' is likely a misspelling of 'tasks'. Also, 'avoid forget things anything crucial' is incorrect; it should be 'avoid forgetting anything crucial'.

× This help me manage my time better an reduce.

✓ This helps me manage my time better and reduce stress.

The singular subject 'This' requires the verb 'helps' (third person singular). Also, 'an reduce' is incorrect; it should be 'and reduce' followed by an object like 'stress' for clarity.

× I have a lot of ways to remember crucial things such as ride on 2 lists or relying on technical apps such as calendar or totalist acts.

✓ I have a lot of ways to remember crucial things such as writing on two lists or relying on technical apps such as calendar or to-do list apps.

'Ride on 2 lists' is incorrect; it should be 'writing on two lists'. 'Totalist acts' is likely a misspelling of 'to-do list apps'. Numbers under ten are usually written in words in formal writing.