Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget tasks I've completed. However, I do have a good memory for faces; for instance, I can remember people I've met only once.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Use correct verb tenses and linking words to make your answer more logical. Provide specific examples to support your points.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, at work, I sometimes forget the tasks I need to complete, which causes delays and makes my manager upset.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Provide clear reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to pray because it helps me feel guided and supported throughout the day. I believe that praying brings me peace and strength.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and coherent. Avoid short, choppy sentences and repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific examples.

例: I remember important things by setting reminders on my phone. For instance, I set an alarm in the morning to remind me of my tasks, which helps me stay organised and complete my work on time.

× I am not good in memorizing things because.

✓ I am not good at memorising things because.

The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', not 'in'. The phrase 'good at' is used to indicate skill or ability in something.

× I keep on forgetting things that was done.

✓ I keep on forgetting things that were done.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the past tense verb should be 'were' instead of 'was' to agree in number.

× If it if I just saw them once but.

✓ If I just saw them once.

The sentence is incomplete and contains redundant words 'if it' and the conjunction 'but' at the end without continuation. Removing 'if it' and 'but' makes the sentence grammatically correct and complete.

× Yes, sometimes I forgot that some things that is very important.

✓ Yes, sometimes I forget that some things are very important.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is appropriate. Also, 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× For example in at work I forget what to do or what the test I need to do.

✓ For example, at work I forget what to do or what test I need to do.

The phrase 'in at work' is incorrect; only 'at work' is needed. Also, 'what the test I need to do' is awkward; 'what test I need to do' is clearer.

× Because of this my work were delayed and my manager will get angry with me.

✓ Because of this my work was delayed and my manager got angry with me.

'Work' is uncountable singular, so the verb should be 'was' not 'were'. Also, the sentence refers to a past event, so 'will get' should be changed to past tense 'got'.

× I just need to remember to pray because that's the one important thing I need to do before I start my day.

✓ I just need to remember to pray because that's the most important thing I need to do before I start my day.

The phrase 'the one important thing' is awkward; 'the most important thing' is the correct superlative form to express priority.

× As I believe God is guiding me all the way and I need to take him for always staying by my side.

✓ As I believe God is guiding me all the way and I need to thank Him for always staying by my side.

The verb 'take' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'thank'. Also, 'Him' should be capitalised when referring to God.

× And I believe. He gives me.

✓ And I believe He gives me strength.

The sentence is incomplete and fragmented. Adding an object like 'strength' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I remember important things by putting a reminder on my phone.

✓ I remember important things by setting a reminder on my phone.

The verb 'putting' is less appropriate here; 'setting a reminder' is the correct collocation.

× For example. In the morning, the alarm will pop up on my phone.

✓ For example, in the morning, the alarm will pop up on my phone.

The period after 'For example' should be a comma to connect the sentence properly.

× And because of this I will I will do my work.

✓ And because of this, I will do my work.

The phrase 'I will' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the duplicate improves clarity and correctness.