Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些断断续续，句子不够连贯，且有语法错误。建议在回答时使用完整句子，避免句子碎片化，并且使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I think I am good at memorizing things. For example, even small details are easy for me to remember. Moreover, when I face exams, I always use specific techniques to help me recall information, which has helped me a lot.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不完整且逻辑不连贯。建议使用完整句子，明确表达自己的想法，并使用连接词使句子更自然。

例: No, I have never forgotten anything important. However, I feel nervous about the possibility of forgetting something important in the future because I am afraid of making such mistakes.

提案: 回答中句子结构不完整，表达不清晰，且有重复和语法错误。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并且具体说明需要记住的事项。

例: To be honest, I don't need to remember many important things in my daily life. Mostly, I just need to remember small details like taking my keys, ID card, student card, and activating my cards on time.

提案: 回答较为简洁，但句子中有语法错误，且连接词使用不够自然。建议使用更准确的语法和连接词，使表达更流畅。

例: I usually write important things on a piece of paper and check it every day until the tasks are completed. This method helps me a lot to remember important matters.

× For example. Even though that is a small thing, I can remember it easily.

✓ For example, even though that is a small thing, I can remember it easily.

句子中“For example.”是一个不完整的句子，应该与后面的句子合并，形成完整的复合句。建议用逗号连接，避免句子断裂。

× And sometimes when I faced exam.

✓ And sometimes when I face exams.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时face而不是过去时faced；另外，exam应为复数exams，表示多次考试。

× Because I'm afraid of. Forget something important.

✓ Because I'm afraid of forgetting something important.

“afraid of”后面应接动名词形式，不能单独用动词原形“forget”。原句断句错误，需合并为完整句子。

× To be honest, there are not. A lot of big details I need to remember in my daily life.

✓ To be honest, there are not a lot of big details I need to remember in my daily life.

“there are not.”后面不应断句，应与后面的内容连成一句完整的句子。

× don't get to take my ID card, don't get to take my student card and activate your card.

✓ don't forget to take my ID card, don't forget to take my student card and activate your card.

“get to take”用法错误，应使用“forget to take”表示“不要忘记带”。

× I would like to write them on a paper and check it everyday until this important things have passed.

✓ I would like to write them on paper and check it every day until these important things have passed.

“a paper”应为不可数名词“paper”；“everyday”是形容词，表示“日常的”，此处应用副词“every day”；“this important things”中“this”指示单数，搭配复数“things”错误，应改为“these important things”。