Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more coherent and natural by avoiding incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: I'm not very good at memorising things directly, but I find making lists very helpful. For example, I organize my daily routines with checklists, which are more reliable for me. Additionally, I enjoy keeping my agenda updated, so I can remember important tasks easily.

提案: Improve clarity and grammar by forming complete sentences and using past tense correctly. Provide a clear example with linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: I can't remember a specific time right now, but I have definitely forgotten something important. For instance, in high school, I forgot about a biology exam because I didn't study over the weekend, so I had to guess the answers during the test.

提案: Focus on speaking clearly and using correct vocabulary. Avoid fragmented sentences and explain your ideas logically with linking words. Be specific about what you need to remember and how you manage it.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to pay my bills on time. To help with this, I use a special app that reminds me when payments are due, so I don't miss any of them.

提案: Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and connect your ideas with linking words. Make your answer more natural by explaining your method clearly and concisely.

例: I remember important things by making lists. This tool helps me keep track of my daily tasks. At the end of each day, I review my list to check what I've completed and move unfinished tasks to the next day.

× It may you know, let's are more reliable.

✓ It may, you know, be more reliable.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'let's are' which is grammatically incorrect. The verb 'be' should be used here in the present subjunctive or infinitive form after 'may'. The correct phrase is 'It may be more reliable.'

× To have a checklist.

✓ Having a checklist helps.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. To improve, it should be a complete sentence such as 'Having a checklist helps.'

× Additionally, I am.

✓ Additionally, I am organized.

The sentence 'Additionally, I am.' is incomplete and lacks a complement. It needs an adjective or phrase to complete the thought, e.g., 'Additionally, I am organized.'

× I really enjoy keeping my agenda update so that's the way I remember things.

✓ I really enjoy keeping my agenda updated, so that's how I remember things.

The adjective 'update' is incorrectly used instead of the past participle 'updated' to describe the agenda. Also, 'so that's the way' is better expressed as 'so that's how'.

× Well, not the right remember right now, but I'm sure I have forget something important.

✓ Well, I don't remember right now, but I'm sure I have forgotten something important.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past participle form 'forgotten' after 'have'. Also, 'not the right remember' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't remember'.

× I forgot. I had an important biology exam so I have to do my pages on the exam because I haven't studied at all during the weekend.

✓ I forgot I had an important biology exam, so I had to do my pages on the exam because I hadn't studied at all during the weekend.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'Have to do' should be past tense 'had to do' to match the past context. Also, 'haven't studied' should be 'hadn't studied' to indicate past perfect tense before the exam.

× Well. Oh my daily journey I need to remember. It's big in my bills on time for that purpose right now I have an A special app that reminds me when it is that you Dave to do the payment so I won't miss any of my. My Molly peels.

✓ Well, in my daily journey, I need to remember to pay my bills on time. For that purpose, right now I have a special app that reminds me when I have to make the payment so I won't miss any of my monthly bills.

The original sentence has multiple errors including incorrect prepositions ('big in my bills'), incorrect word choice ('Dave' instead of 'have', 'Molly peels' instead of 'monthly bills'), and sentence fragments. Correct prepositions and vocabulary are necessary for clarity.

× Well, I'm really good at making lease.

✓ Well, I'm really good at making lists.

The word 'lease' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'lists' which is plural. This is a singular/plural issue and vocabulary error.

× And this list is a tool that allowed me to remember everything about the day.

✓ And this list is a tool that allows me to remember everything about the day.

The verb 'allowed' is past tense, but the sentence context is present tense. It should be 'allows' to maintain present tense consistency.

× So almost at the end of the day, I go over my list and start checking what I have done and probably move things forward if I didn't have the opportunity.

✓ So, almost at the end of the day, I go over my list and start checking what I have done and probably move things forward if I didn't have the opportunity earlier.

The sentence is mostly correct but lacks clarity at the end. Adding 'earlier' clarifies the conditional clause. Also, a comma after 'So' improves readability.