Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget easily. So, when I have important tasks, I write notes on my phone or use sticky notes to remind myself.

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，句子结构不完整，建议注意时态一致性并完善句子表达。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For instance, last week I completely forgot that I had an appointment with my guidance counselor to discuss my timetable for next year. I felt embarrassed because it was an important meeting and I wasn't prepared.

提案: 回答中断句不连贯，词汇使用错误，表达不清晰，建议练习连贯表达并使用正确词汇。

例: I need to remember to bring important belongings to school every day, like my lunch box and water bottle, which help me stay healthy and hydrated. Also, I always bring my gym clothes because I have gym class and need to change into proper attire. Forgetting these things would make my day uncomfortable.

提案: 回答较为完整，但存在拼写错误和重复，建议注意拼写准确性并简化表达。

例: The main way I remember important things is by writing notes or setting reminders on my phone since I always carry it with me. This helps me stay organized and prevents me from forgetting important tasks. For example, I can easily check my notes throughout the day.

× sometimes I'm easy to forget things so.

✓ sometimes I easily forget things.

这里“easy”用作形容词，表示“容易”，但应使用副词“easily”来修饰动词“forget”。这是副词和形容词的混用错误。

× I will write down the notes in my phone.

✓ I will write down notes in my phone.

“notes”前不需要定冠词“the”，因为这里指的是一般的笔记，而非特指的笔记。

× Or or write down some stickers to remind me.

✓ Or write down some stickers to remind me.

句子中重复了“or”，应删除多余的词。

× I completely forgot I have an appointment with my guidance counselor to discuss my timetable next year.

✓ I completely forgot I had an appointment with my guidance counselor to discuss my timetable next year.

主句是过去时“forgot”，从句应使用过去时“had”，保持时态一致。

× because is important meeting for me and.

✓ because it is an important meeting for me.

缺少主语“it”，且“important meeting”前应加不定冠词“an”，句子结构不完整。

× I need to remember to bring my. Belongings.

✓ I need to remember to bring my belongings.

“my”后不应有句号，且“belongings”是复数名词，句子应连贯。

× Something is important to school everyday such as my lunch box and my water bottle because they help me stay healthy and hydrated.

✓ Some important things for school every day, such as my lunch box and my water bottle, help me stay healthy and hydrated.

“Something is important to school everyday”表达不清，应改为“Some important things for school every day”，且“everyday”应分开为“every day”。

× Additionally, I always bring my gym closest since I have gym class 80 and need to change into proper attire for getting these items will make my day less comfort.

✓ Additionally, I always bring my gym clothes since I have gym class and need to change into proper attire. Getting these items will make my day more comfortable.

“gym closest”应为“gym clothes”；“gym class 80”中的“80”可能是误写，应删除；“less comfort”应为“more comfortable”，形容词用法错误。

× the main way. I remember important things is by writing down the nodes or setting reminders on my phone

✓ The main way I remember important things is by writing down the notes or setting reminders on my phone.

“nodes”应为“notes”，拼写错误；句中不应有句号断开。

× if I write notes on my phones, I can easily check it during the day.

✓ If I write notes on my phone, I can easily check them during the day.

“phones”应为单数“phone”，且“notes”是复数，指代时应使用“them”而非“it”。