Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ không cần thiết. Hãy tập trung vào việc mô tả khả năng ghi nhớ của bạn một cách cụ thể và logic.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember important dates and details when I study or hang out with my friends.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và khó hiểu do lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, kể một ví dụ cụ thể về việc quên điều quan trọng, sử dụng câu đơn giản và có cấu trúc rõ ràng.

例: Yes, I once forgot an important exam date. I was very disappointed because I missed the test and had to wait for a retake.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều từ không đúng và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, liệt kê những việc bạn cần nhớ trong cuộc sống hàng ngày một cách cụ thể và có cấu trúc rõ ràng.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to exercise in the morning, complete my work tasks, and take breaks to stay healthy.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và thiếu mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích phương pháp bạn sử dụng để ghi nhớ những điều quan trọng, ví dụ như sử dụng công nghệ hoặc ghi chú.

例: I usually remember important things by using my smartphone to set reminders or by writing notes in a notebook.

× Yes, I have a good memories when I work a Chai I with my best friend hanging out and or we are spending money to buying together or some Doran we are play very happy.

✓ Yes, I have good memories when I work at Chai I with my best friend hanging out, and we spend money buying things together or sometimes we play happily.

The word 'memories' is plural, so 'a good memories' is incorrect; it should be 'good memories' without 'a'. Also, 'to buying' is incorrect; it should be 'buying' after 'spending money'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I have a good memories when I work a Chai I with my best friend hanging out and or we are spending money to buying together or some Doran we are play very happy.

✓ Yes, I have good memories when I work at Chai I with my best friend hanging out, and we spend money buying things together or sometimes we play happily.

The preposition 'a' before 'Chai I' is incorrect; it should be 'at Chai I' to indicate location. Also, 'or some Doran' is unclear and likely a misuse of words; replaced with 'sometimes' for clarity.

× Yes, one time I forgot Dom.

✓ Yes, one time I forgot Dom.

No correction needed here; the past tense 'forgot' is used correctly.

× There is a day when I have only the exams.

✓ There was a day when I had only exams.

The sentence refers to a past event, so 'There is' should be 'There was' and 'have' should be 'had' to match past tense.

× I also I'm very disappointed because I were some large the spot the slot too.

✓ I was also very disappointed because I missed some important spots on the test too.

'I were' is incorrect; it should be 'I was' for singular first person past tense. The original sentence is unclear; corrected for clarity and grammar.

× When I. Get up I will press mitis and I do exercise so when I done I have a break first so dealership and I will least you doing something when half days.

✓ When I get up, I will press the mistis and do exercise. After I finish, I take a break first, then I will do something for half the day.

The original sentence has multiple structural errors and unclear phrases. Corrected for proper sentence structure, verb forms, and clarity.

× When I. Get up I will press mitis and I do exercise so when I done I have a break first so dealership and I will least you doing something when half days.

✓ When I get up, I will press the mistis and do exercise. After I finish, I take a break first, then I will do something for half the day.

Prepositions like 'when half days' are incorrect; corrected to 'for half the day' to indicate duration.

× I don't know because when I think they. Work is true important so I will remember an technology, some a book and maybe is smart phone too.

✓ I don't know because when I think, work is truly important, so I will remember technology, some books, and maybe a smartphone too.

Incorrect pronouns like 'they' and 'an technology' are corrected to proper nouns and articles. Also, 'is smart phone' corrected to 'a smartphone'.