Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and redundancies. Try to give a direct response with clear structure and correct vocabulary. Avoid filler words and focus on expressing your idea naturally and effectively.

例: I used to be good at memorizing things, but since I had COVID-19, my memory has not been as sharp as before.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but lacks coherence and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about what you forget and why. Keep your sentences clear and concise.

例: Yes, I often forget important things like bringing my pen or pencil to school. Moreover, I sometimes forget to do my homework, which affects my studies.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more organized. Use proper verb tenses and linking words to improve flow. Be specific about what you need to remember and why it is important.

例: Since I am a student, I need to remember to study regularly, complete my homework on time, and review the lessons I learned at school.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to explain your methods for remembering important things clearly, using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Mention specific techniques you use.

例: I usually set alarms or reminders on my phone to help me remember important tasks. Sometimes, I repeat information aloud to myself to make sure I don't forget it.

× Actually I was, but now I'm not capable to member yeah take memory to remember my old things after the after when I OS cash with the kovit 90, I was not enough to catch stuff memories.

✓ Actually I was, but now I'm not capable of remembering, yeah, taking memory to remember my old things after I had COVID-19, I was not able to recall memories well.

The phrase 'capable to member' is incorrect; the correct form is 'capable of remembering' because 'capable' is followed by 'of' plus a gerund. Also, 'take memory to remember' is awkward and unclear; 'taking memory to remember' is not standard. The sentence also contains tense and word choice issues; 'after when I OS cash with the kovit 90' is unclear and likely meant 'after I had COVID-19'. The modal verb 'was not enough to catch' should be 'was not able to recall' to express ability in the past.

× Actually I was, but now I'm not capable to member yeah take memory to remember my old things after the after when I OS cash with the kovit 90, I was not enough to catch stuff memories.

✓ Actually I was, but now I'm not capable of remembering, yeah, taking memory to remember my old things after I had COVID-19, I was not able to recall memories well.

The phrase 'after when I OS cash with the kovit 90' is an incorrect past tense expression and unclear. It should be 'after I had COVID-19' to correctly express a past event. Also, 'I was not enough to catch stuff memories' is incorrect; it should be 'I was not able to recall memories' to properly use past tense and express ability.

× Yes, when I whenever I go on to school I missed several things like pen, pencil I already have.

✓ Yes, whenever I go to school I miss several things like pens and pencils I already have.

The sentence mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly. 'Pen, pencil' should be pluralized to 'pens and pencils' to match 'several things'. Also, 'missed' is past tense but the question is general, so present tense 'miss' is appropriate.

× Yes, when I whenever I go on to school I missed several things like pen, pencil I already have.

✓ Yes, whenever I go to school I miss several things like pens and pencils I already have.

The use of 'missed' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'miss' is correct.

× The main thing is I always forgot to do my homework and to study the things.

✓ The main thing is I always forget to do my homework and to study the things.

The phrase 'I always forgot' mixes past tense 'forgot' with 'always' which indicates habitual action; present tense 'forget' is correct here.

× Actually I was, but now I'm not capable to member yeah take memory to remember my old things after the after when I OS cash with the kovit 90, I was not enough to catch stuff memories.

✓ Actually I was, but now I'm not capable of remembering, yeah, taking memory to remember my old things after I had COVID-19, I was not able to recall memories well.

The phrase 'capable to member' is incorrect; 'capable of' should be followed by a gerund ('remembering'). Also, 'take memory to remember' is awkward; 'taking memory' is a gerund form but the phrase is unclear and should be rephrased.

× Yes, when I whenever I go on to school I missed several things like pen, pencil I already have.

✓ Yes, whenever I go to school I miss several things like pens and pencils I already have.

The preposition 'on to school' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to school'.

× I always said the band or otherwise. He took an alarm that reminds me what everything is.

✓ I always set an alarm or use other methods. I have an alarm that reminds me of everything.

The pronoun 'He' is incorrectly used to refer to an alarm, which is an object and should be referred to as 'it'. Also, 'said the band' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misstatement; 'set an alarm' is appropriate.

× I always said the band or otherwise. He took an alarm that reminds me what everything is.

✓ I always set an alarm or use other methods. I have an alarm that reminds me of everything.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Said the band or otherwise' is not a proper phrase. The corrected sentences clarify the intended meaning and improve sentence structure.

× I always said the band or otherwise. He took an alarm that reminds me what everything is. Because all the time I go, I forgot all the things, but sometimes I remember things that what is necessary for me.

✓ I always set an alarm or use other methods. It is an alarm that reminds me of everything. Because all the time I go, I forget all the things, but sometimes I remember the things that are necessary for me.

The verb 'said' is past tense but 'always' indicates habitual action, so present tense 'set' is correct. 'He took an alarm' is incorrect; 'It is an alarm' is correct. 'I forgot' should be 'I forget' for habitual action. 'Things that what is necessary' is incorrect; 'things that are necessary' is correct.