Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
I'm quite good at remembering short term life phone number or desk, but when I when it comes to long term memory I sometimes should get unless I review info often.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yes, one I forgot to bring my passport to the airport. I work online my an I had to rest home in Rockies. Cynthia, I always double check before leaving.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
In my daily life, I need to remember to cook, schedule an. Apartment because if I fought with them my team can become fully poop quickly. Whisk all a lot of stress. Is it important to say organization?
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
I easily writing down all set reminder on my phone. This helps me stay on top things. For example, I you To Do List to remember my take every day.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 55.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising short-term information like phone numbers, but I find it harder to remember things in the long term unless I review them regularly.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 40.0提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh những phần không liên quan hoặc không rõ nghĩa. Nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.
例: Yes, once I forgot to bring my passport to the airport, which caused me a lot of trouble. Since then, I always double-check my belongings before leaving home.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 30.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.
例: In my daily life, I need to remember to cook and manage my schedule carefully. If I don't stay organized, my work can become chaotic and stressful.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 45.0提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách sử dụng từ để câu trả lời chính xác và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.
例: I usually write down important tasks and set reminders on my phone. This method helps me stay organized. For example, I use a to-do list app to keep track of my daily tasks.
文法
× I'm quite good at remembering short term life phone number or desk, but when I when it comes to long term memory I sometimes should get unless I review info often.
✓ I'm quite good at remembering short-term phone numbers or desks, but when it comes to long-term memory, I sometimes forget unless I review info often.
The original sentence has incorrect verb usage and missing words. 'Should get' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'forget'. Also, 'short term life phone number or desk' is unclear and should be 'short-term phone numbers or desks'. Hyphens are needed in compound adjectives like 'short-term' and 'long-term'. The phrase 'when I when it comes' has a repeated 'when' which should be removed.
× Yes, one I forgot to bring my passport to the airport. I work online my an I had to rest home in Rockies. Cynthia, I always double check before leaving.
✓ Yes, once I forgot to bring my passport to the airport. I work online and I had to rest at home in the Rockies. Cynthia, I always double-check before leaving.
The sentence has several errors: 'one' should be 'once' to indicate a single past event. 'I work online my an' is unclear and should be 'I work online and'. 'Rest home' should be 'rest at home'. 'Rockies' should be preceded by 'the' as it is a specific mountain range. 'Double check' should be hyphenated as 'double-check' when used as a verb.
× In my daily life, I need to remember to cook, schedule an. Apartment because if I fought with them my team can become fully poop quickly. Whisk all a lot of stress. Is it important to say organization?
✓ In my daily life, I need to remember to cook and schedule an appointment because if I fall behind, my team can become fully booked quickly, which causes a lot of stress. Is it important to say organization?
The original sentence has multiple issues: 'schedule an. Apartment' is incorrect; it should be 'schedule an appointment'. 'If I fought with them' is incorrect; likely intended 'if I fall behind'. 'Fully poop' is a typo for 'fully booked'. 'Whisk all a lot of stress' is unclear; corrected to 'which causes a lot of stress'. The sentence structure and word choice need correction for clarity.
× I easily writing down all set reminder on my phone. This helps me stay on top things. For example, I you To Do List to remember my take every day.
✓ I easily write down and set reminders on my phone. This helps me stay on top of things. For example, I use a To-Do List to remember my tasks every day.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'writing' instead of 'write'. 'All set reminder' should be 'and set reminders'. 'Stay on top things' is missing 'of'. 'I you To Do List' is incorrect; it should be 'I use a To-Do List'. 'My take' should be 'my tasks'. These corrections improve grammar and clarity.
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