Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma English prayog natural chhaina ra artha spashta chhaina. Tapai le sentence haru ramrari banaunu parcha ra arthama spashtata dinu parcha. Sentence haru chhoto ra prabhavshali banaunu parcha, ra artha bujhna sajilo huna parcha.

例: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget items easily. For example, I often misplace my keys or phone and have to search for them later.

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra tyo uttar lai udaharan sanga samarthan garnu parcha. Linking words prayog garnu parcha jastai 'for example' ra 'because'.

例: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, yesterday I put my key on the table and later I couldn't find it, so I had to search for it.

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma sentence haru ramrari jodne ra grammar sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra tyo uttar lai thap vivaran sanga samarthan garnu parcha. Vocabulary ko prayog thap ramro garna saknuhunchha.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to take my medicine twice a day because I am ill. Also, I have to remember my appointments so that I can go to the hospital on time.

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma English prayog ra sentence structure ma sudhar garnu parcha. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra tyo uttar lai spashta ra prabhavshali banau. Linking words ra thulo vocabulary prayog garnu parcha.

例: Usually, I write notes every day to remember important things. I also keep reminders on my phone to help me not forget anything.

× I will, I'm not a good memories, I easily forget everything whenever I keep one thing.

✓ I will, I'm not good at memorising, I easily forget everything whenever I try to remember something.

The word 'memories' is a noun and incorrectly used here; the correct adjective phrase is 'good at memorising'. Also, 'whenever I keep one thing' is unclear and should be 'whenever I try to remember something' to convey the intended meaning.

× I forgot this flies and somewhere I find this items.

✓ I forgot these files and somewhere I find these items.

The word 'flies' is incorrect; the intended word is 'files'. Also, 'this' should be 'these' to agree with the plural nouns 'files' and 'items'.

× Yes, usually I forgot important things every day because.

✓ Yes, usually I forget important things every day because...

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is appropriate.

× Aye. Till something an I did something for example yesterday.

✓ Yes. For example, yesterday I did something.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear; restructuring it improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I put a key on the table and find him.

✓ I put a key on the table and found it.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrect for 'key' which is an object; 'it' should be used. Also, tense consistency requires 'found' instead of 'find'.

× Well in my everyday life I need to remember or medicine because I am a sick so I need to take a medicine's morning and evening and also I need to remember all my appointment so usually go with hospital immediately.

✓ Well, in my everyday life I need to remember my medicine because I am sick, so I need to take medicine in the morning and evening. Also, I need to remember all my appointments so I usually go to the hospital immediately.

Incorrect prepositions like 'or' instead of 'my', 'a medicine's' instead of 'medicine', and missing prepositions like 'to' before 'the hospital' are corrected. Also, plural form 'appointments' is used correctly.

× Usually every day I wrote a note about imputing things and then also I take all all around for remembers in putting things.

✓ Usually every day I write a note about important things and then I also take notes to remember things.

The verb 'wrote' is past tense but the sentence describes a habitual action, so present tense 'write' is appropriate. The word 'imputing' is incorrect and replaced with 'important'. The phrase 'take all all around for remembers in putting things' is unclear and corrected to 'take notes to remember things'.